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Comedy Club Slapstick

tripwire with spiked barbs  two trite puns joined at the hip slapstick jabs that bruise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/26/2011 5:30:00 PM
Lovely haiku , Stephen
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Date: 3/26/2011 4:23:00 PM
Makes me think of Abbot and Costello and some of the great old Vaudeville duos -- even Martin and Lewis. Stephen, you could enter this in the "laughter" contest. The puns may have been trite, but they still made us laugh. Love, Carolyn
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