Comedy Club Slapstick

tripwire with spiked barbs 
two trite puns joined at the hip
slapstick jabs that bruise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 5:30 PM
Lovely haiku , Stephen
Devonshire Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 4:23 PM
Makes me think of Abbot and Costello and some of the great old Vaudeville duos -- even Martin and Lewis. Stephen, you could enter this in the "laughter" contest. The puns may have been trite, but they still made us laugh. Love, Carolyn
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