Lunita Blanca Poet Free verse

Come With Me

Come with me and you will see
   colored stars up in the sky
I wait for you so take your time
   just relax and come with me
We will find relief of stress so
   again I ask please come with me
Come with me and set us free so 
   we can learn 
How we can come together

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Patricia Leduc January 14, 2018 at 10:16 PM Carlos..I didn't realize the double meaning until I read the comments. Goes well either way. Lunita Blanca January 15, 2018 at 8:14 AM Patricia, thank you for your kind comments.

Wardah Ahmed January 12, 2018 at 6:10 PM I like the conclusion... Lovely write... Hugs Wardah. Lunita Blanca January 12, 2018 at 6:51 PM thanks

Beejadhur Sewumber January 12, 2018 at 11:09 AM Nice piece, my friend. Lots of meaning. Lunita Blanca January 12, 2018 at 11:52 AM Thanks. Hope it doesn't offend anyone.