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Come With Me

Come with me, my love-come now, come clean in sheer sheen, our shimm'ring Love.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 3:16:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning line, Ryan :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/27/2020 3:14:00 AM

Sincerity is always best, Ryan, my compliments on your win--commenting on what Bobby is stating, sadly 'tis true, certain parts of the judging when brought to its conclusiveness, stubbornly wont change, it happens, cause unknown, something to look into, anyway, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:39:00 PM

Great Monoku, Ryan , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Bobby May

Date: 8/26/2020 3:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement, This should have been 2nd place I tried to change it but couldn't Sorry!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2020 3:49:00 PM

nicely done. If it's for the flirting contest, go read his rule of how to do the title!!