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You read out of obligation, a tit for tat consolation... a "thank you for your visit" affirmation it's cool, this unspoken rule I do it too, so what’s new? It's only being civil community code of camaraderie who can break free? It needs to be done loyalties need to be won so does the "comment hit and run" then on to another one I appreciate that, truth be told this give and take system should hold on poetic pleasantries, I am sold “Reciprocity” is gold Oh, but that's not quite the same as being sure that you came because I'm a favorite name in your poet hall of fame Come goaded by greed desperate to feed voyeuristic as I bleed needing my pain to be freed Come craving my rhyme fix the potency of this mix my poetic party tricks Come click for the best picks Read the poet pillaged by pain who's been baptized by rain holding on to the sane let me battle your bane Read me because you know you need me to grow Dip in the stream of this flow words above, words below Read and be set on fire by word kindling of desire Flames that lick passion higher making each thought perspire Obligation is overrated though my words might be dated the ideas? NOT antiquated to existence they’re related Come visit me Come here so you’ll see Passion infused poetry that melds you and me Eileen Manassian

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Date: 1/7/2025 3:42:00 PM
Writing a poem brings personal satisfaction, but it is in sharing it with others that it reaches full development, according to how it is received/commented on. The number of hits does not really matter to me; an honest comment is worth much more. ~ Goodnight & hugs my friend // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/5/2025 9:13:00 AM
A comment by you is always percious. Thank you for dropping by.
Date: 12/27/2024 3:34:00 PM
This is the actual meeting of a "Muse". The writer of a masterpiece. The truthful subject is laid before Soupers and we know every word is true. This is our worship and being worshiped. The great thing is running up on that exceptional jewel that entertains us the best, makes us cry, cause us to think, reveals that hidden plain sight truth.
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Date: 12/5/2024 5:22:00 AM
I think all poets will relate to this one. I have read almost every poem you have posted so I appreciate your gift.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/5/2025 9:12:00 AM
You are a constant in my poetic journey. Thank you, Richard. I can always count on you.
Date: 11/27/2024 10:14:00 AM
So many truths written in this passion filled message of expressing one's observation in commenting on one's Poetry. To acknowledge and appreciate the others work and then returning the favor in positive reinforcing they others Poetry. It is important that we shared and support one another especially when we have supported them and expect the same from them is only fair. You send many great messages Eileen. This one is a favorite for me because it is how most us feel, and you have eloquently
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/27/2024 10:56:00 AM
Yes. It's only right and proper to show appreciation for someone who has taken the time to read and comment. That's true. I know who my regulars are. I've lost some popularity in recent times. I haven't been good at reading others poems, I must admit. I've been struggling. I'll try to do better. Blessings and thanks
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/27/2024 10:18:00 AM
shared for us and undeniable truth in caring for your fellow writers. I hope this sends a message to those that selfishly are inconsiderate in fairly responding to one who has taken the time to read, and comment. Love your raw emotion in writing how we all feel when we do not receive what we expect from the other writer. A favorite Eileen God bless you for being honest in your experience. Thank you so much for sharing this truth...
Date: 11/25/2024 1:38:00 PM
Wow, I love that picture of you! You are beautiful, AND your poetry. <3 Words I'm considering today....and how are you? I hear Israel is going to reach a ceasefire there, am I right? Hope peace reigns in your life and heart.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/27/2024 10:59:00 AM
What a kind sweet compliment, dear. Yes. Today a cease fire went into effect. I'm glad we don't have to hear those awful drones or the sound of bombs anymore. Thanks for being such a great support. Blessings
Date: 11/22/2024 11:57:00 AM
"Reciprocity" "obligation" I certainly dont want anyone feeling "obligated" to read a poem. I read sometimes but do not leave comments. Over here, thats the same as not reading. I tend to go by the Willie Nelson philosophy. "Throw it out and see what comes back" Hello Eileen. Still as lovely as ever, I see:)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/22/2024 8:03:00 PM
Thank you for reading AND commenting! It's good when a poet knows his/her poem isn't lost in the void. Comments are appreciated. I think community is what makes this place special. Thanks for the compliment. :) Good to have you visit again.
Date: 11/22/2024 9:18:00 AM
You’ve expressed this very well, Eileen (no surprise there!) and I can understand just how you feel. I find as time goes on, there are just a handful of fellow poets who read and comment on my poems and I’m guilty of the same thing in the other direction. As nice as it is to get acknowledged, I guess we have to be our own biggest fans…
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/22/2024 8:05:00 PM
Wise advice, dear. You are a poet I will look up if you haven't been by for a while. I enjoy your work. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 11/22/2024 5:58:00 AM
Every poets' wish, to be truly valued and appreciated. Most of social media is indeed tit for tat, you follow me I'll follow you, you like mine I'll like yours, let me place in your contest and I'll be sure to place you in mine etc etc etc. it is what it is. But there are always at least a handful who really do look forward, eagerly, to your next post. They are gems
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/22/2024 8:07:00 PM
Yes... those who do follow and read are gems. Thank you for dropping by and the words of encouragement. I found this poem on my laptop. It was entitled unfinished, so I thought I haven't posted it... why not? I sometimes start a poem and then run dry of thoughts. It helps to come back later. I have a sneaky suspicion I might have posted this before but can't be sure.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/22/2024 5:59:00 AM
Nice poem. Refreshingly honest
Date: 11/22/2024 4:34:00 AM
Dear Eileen, Today I visited you and was delighted! What a powerful exploration of online poetry communities! I loved your clever wordplay and honest insights about the give-and-take nature of sharing poetry are spot-on. The way you challenge readers to engage genuinely, beyond obligation, is both thought-provoking and inspiring. I love how you think with such authenticity! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/22/2024 8:09:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind words. I have some regulars to my page and they always make me happy. Community is important. I'm not as popular here as I used to be. I guess I'm losing my touch. Blessings
Date: 11/22/2024 3:21:00 AM
This is so true, so I thank you for reading me first. But there is worse. Some poets do not return the compliment. Others shunned me. One expected me to marry her when my wife died. Another did not realise I spent three months in hospital and expected me to know. I now realise my daughter deleted all my emails. She never forgave me. Oh, the list is endless. But I plod on.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/22/2024 8:12:00 PM
That's quite a lot of drama. I hope you're past all of that. It's easy to fall in love with a poet through reading their poetry, but demands for a relationship is going too far. Thanks for the visit and the lovely compliment.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 11/22/2024 3:22:00 AM
Beautiful portrait.

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