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my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words from the renaissance. for instance words liked gracious,extravaganza,etc... this poem is about the brilliancy of a moon. i don’t add capitalization’s on my writing.

come undone

come statistic,come undone
come statistic,come a galaxy
come a galaxy,come a statistic galaxy
come a galaxy,come a statistic universe
come a galaxy,come a statistic undone
onto is onto a galaxy
onto is onto a statistic

onto is onto a moon
onto is onto a bright moon
bright is brighter than a moon
bright is brighter than a brilliance moon
brilliant is brighter than brilliant
the moon is brighter than a brilliant moon
lightening is more brilliant than lightening

lightening is a statistic lightening
brilliant is brilliant of lightening
lightening struck the brilliant of lightening
struck a statistic,struck a galaxy,struck a lightening
brilliantly is brilliantly struck by lightening
struck by lightening,struck by a brilliant lightening
struck by lightening,struck by a brilliant moon
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July 31, 2026 at 9:43 PM
The strength of this piece is that it performs disintegration rather than just describing it.
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