Come to the Waters: A Hopeful Heart

How You Feel and How God Feels Poetry 
Contest //Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick
Contest Judged:  8/25/2025 12:00:00 AM
( 1st Place )

Written: August 10, 2025


( Inspired by Isaiah 55 and reflecting on hope and faith. )

I come not full, but open wide,
With hands unfurled quietly yearning.
Your vows fall like gentle rain--
Words that flow from wells unending!

Through the clouds silver-haired persist.
I count on the daybreak You foster,
The meadow's bare-- still run deep.
Your stillness does not imply You sleep.

Faith takes small steps on shaky ground---
trusting quietly in what You’ve planned.
Your word-- like mist may sometimes fade,
but harvest waits for gentle hands.

You say, “Come and take, no cost at all,”
so I bring trust, not trying to fall.
My heart feels weak but still reaches out,
toward waters flowing without a shout.

You see me, not just struggling hard,
but waiting patiently, and yet still thrives.
And in your eyes
I'’m not alone--
I’m known and loved
deeply known.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Evangeline Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 7:17 AM
Dear Rowena, this poem is truly moving. Only in God's hands can we be truly be known and loved, although we're often too faithless to receive Him. Big congrats on the win!
Agustin Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 11:19 PM
Wow! Congrats, dear poetic Kababayan. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Velasco Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 11:34 PM
Thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 1:53 PM
Thank you for entering your poetic winning work in my contest. I appreciate you supporting my contest efforts. Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
Velasco Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 4:36 PM
Thank you so much, Sara! I truly appreciate your kind words and the effort you put into hosting the contest. Congratulations as well on bringing poets together in such a meaningful way!
Baker Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 8:44 PM
A deeply spiritual poem of assurance that He is always with us and knows us well. All praise to the God Creation! It is faith that pleases our Heavenly Father. In this world we will all face trials and tribulations, but we can be full of hope because of His promises. Excellent poetry, Rowena. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill
Velasco Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:59 AM
Thank you so much, Bill. Your words truly encourage my heart. Yes, His promises are our anchor through every storm, and it’s such a blessing to know He walks with us each step of the way. Smiles and blessings to you as well, dear friend.
Crandall Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 8:02 PM
I like these lines "The meadow's bare-- still run deep. Your stillness does not imply You sleep."
Velasco Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:57 AM
Thank you.
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 5:08 AM
Beautiful and romantic!
Velasco Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:57 AM
Thank you .
Maverick Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 10:35 PM
Very searching and open hearted piece Rowena I trust it will inspire many.' Thank you for the post'
Velasco Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 11:27 PM
Thanks Joe!
Hind Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:13 PM
An inspiration and beautiful to read - <3 I love the whole metaphor. and " And in your eyes I'’m not alone-- I’m known and loved deeply known." :)
Velasco Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:15 PM
Thank you so much!
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