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Come to the Pub with me

Come with me and have a welcome drink
to my favourite Irish Inn
as winter gales across glens do blow
take life,  a bit , more slow

He stood in front of oak wood bar
his drink upon the table
he hadn't traveled so very far
by horseback he was able

He was a handsome strong built guy
and the apple in  a mothers eye
and he was just a lowly farmers boy
but his fathers  great and proudest joy

He was asked by all to sing a tune
amongst the  grey and smoky room
and the fiddle trios were up and playing
and then all feet , could not stop tapping

chorus

he had a voice of angels
a harp,  the background tune
he sang of times of ancient woes
of hardships,  i am told

a hush went round and across the room
but outside the storm was blowing
but his voice so clear chased away all gloom 
as the song,, they were all knowing

Then everyone was standing, clapping
for him to sing again
so he had a swig of black gold Guinness
and bowed,  as if he'd finished

The fire in grate burnt orange bright
gave room its warm and welcome light
and then all voices cheered for more
so he smiled and walk back to the floor

A ballad this time he softly sang
i'm told about his love
and when the flow of words began
emotions , all overcome

chorus 2

he had a voice of angels
a harp,  the background tune
he sang of times of ancient woes 
of hardships,  l am told

bridge

yes,  he was his mothers heart of joy
and he was his fathers boy
but in War ,  he was so very young,
                                       he died
                                                 like so many.... 
                                                                  in  wasted lives






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Date: 7/9/2025 2:39:00 AM
Reading this poem I felt like I was in the pub, dancing and singing :)
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/9/2025 3:19:00 AM
i'm so happy it did that :) l wrote it so very quick, l think about 30 mins, so it doesnt have too good a rhyme flow, but l still like it. Also now think l could have added more verses. Might update at a later time if im able. J
Date: 7/9/2025 2:38:00 AM
Splendid writing...I love your writing style. The ending is so sad about the wasted potential...it hits right in the heart. Oh how beautifully sad this poem is....
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/9/2025 3:23:00 AM
l would have loved to have studied being a lyricist, its quite hard and l can never get the verses that would match music, but im ok just having fun writing, and that's what matters :) Thanks again Anne. x
Date: 7/8/2025 3:28:00 PM
Like from a former time! Enjoyed!
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/9/2025 1:33:00 AM
l love history, so l think my poems at moment will have themes to them. Wonder what my todays poem journey will be..l love it. l keep finding my poems grammar mistakes and ryhme out of synic, but l dont care lol..l love writing. Happy writing day Kimx
Date: 7/8/2025 1:35:00 PM
Well they all had a bonnie fine time for a spell anyway. Aye. He'll be back...
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/8/2025 1:50:00 PM
I'll bet
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/8/2025 1:47:00 PM
They sure do know how to have a good time in an Irish pub.. l can vouch for that. l must get some Guinness in for Winter nights, but the bottle stuff doesnt taste the same as the real stuff as in Dublin.

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