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Come To Me

come to me my darling, my deary, my sweet cheeked youth. though snow may curl lovingly about your brow and life trace deep paths around your ardent eyes snuggle me cosy comforter. your wisdom sings through a masterful touch that travels my landscape laughing that i blush as you discover me once again. your hand relaxes liquid honey trails flow lazily. deep in your chest I hear your heart my charm, my grail; there too echoes your need-filled voice. you fill my arms handsomely we taste passion mellowed by time it is rich varied tender-wild and artful the edginess smoothed by knowing come to me my snowy leopard make time dance

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Date: 9/3/2017 3:22:00 PM
Lovely words of passion ignition Patricia, nicely captured - just love it
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/3/2017 6:01:00 PM
Thank you Michael for your visit and comment.
Date: 9/3/2017 2:30:00 PM
Oh Oh Oh I feel it with you. Ardent love revisited.So exquisitely descriptive.Wonderful to have had such feelings.More than mere wonderful to be able to put it into words. Love it!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/3/2017 2:36:00 PM
I truly believe that passion as well as love of great depth and warmth can only be appreciated when mature for many reasons. Thank you Peter for understanding this piece and from whence it came i
Date: 9/3/2017 10:09:00 AM
Patty me lass I don't know how you do it! Get so much heart, soul and feeling into mere words. It's a skill I have yet to master. You make words tactile and sensual.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/3/2017 10:28:00 AM
Thank you kindly gentle soul.
Date: 9/3/2017 7:28:00 AM
Oh Patricia to know loves rapture like that again. How splendidly written. The last verse just melts the words of the whole poem. I also want to thank you for having read so many of mine . Im going through my dry spell. Things are a bit pear shaped right now. You make it up for me. Love J
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/3/2017 11:18:00 AM
I is different at my age. All the posing has stopped, being honest is not fearful any longer. You know what is important. Then you love the heck out of it because there are no conditions. Thank you Jeannie.
Date: 9/3/2017 5:08:00 AM
This is a fabulous love write, free flowing with tenderness at every corner! I surely loved reading this delightful poem this morning my friend! What a tremendous poem, such a grandiose piece, Great Work!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/3/2017 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Russell for your lovely comment. I hope you are continuing to heal.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/3/2017 10:18:00 AM
Date: 9/3/2017 12:01:00 AM
A finely written love poem, I do envy those who can write love poems like this. For I simply cannot. Enjoyed the read. Regards, Craig
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/3/2017 12:06:00 AM
No secret Craig I was in love at the time. Thanks for you comment

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