Come Take My Hand, April 2015

Come take my hand

into a imaginary land

show me the way

on my computer I will play

draw me in and all night

until early daylight.

My computer I feel I can not

live with out.

come take my hand

to your educational land

and as I touch your button

I am sure you will show 

me something.

My life my soul is all in your control

you hold my life in your hands

and you hold as many pictures as you

can stand.

come take my hand

into your worldly land

up dates about the news and where 

to buy my new shows,

my computer everyday

you keep my life at bay.

and oh no if something go's wrong

or a virus attacks I will

have none of that.

come take my hand

each day I know it your plan

I just sit down and pick up my mouse

and never ever leave my house.

when it says you have mail

I hurry to see,

oh well.

I put you to bed at night

but  I am right back hitting your keys

at early daylight.

come take my hand

join me into  my computer land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/18/2015 6:55:00 PM
Sharlotte, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 8:30:00 AM
I enjoyed this piece, congratulations!
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:16:00 PM
I think many of us are too often in Computer land. Congrats on your cool poem.
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Date: 4/16/2015 2:43:00 PM
Great poem Sharlotte - it is amazing how much we reply on computers for our everyday lives - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sharlotte Newan
Date: 4/17/2015 12:44:00 AM
THANK YOU
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