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Come Take My Hand, April 2015

Come take my hand into a imaginary land show me the way on my computer I will play draw me in and all night until early daylight. My computer I feel I can not live with out. come take my hand to your educational land and as I touch your button I am sure you will show me something. My life my soul is all in your control you hold my life in your hands and you hold as many pictures as you can stand. come take my hand into your worldly land up dates about the news and where to buy my new shows, my computer everyday you keep my life at bay. and oh no if something go's wrong or a virus attacks I will have none of that. come take my hand each day I know it your plan I just sit down and pick up my mouse and never ever leave my house. when it says you have mail I hurry to see, oh well. I put you to bed at night but I am right back hitting your keys at early daylight. come take my hand join me into my computer land.

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Date: 4/18/2015 6:55:00 PM
Sharlotte, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 8:30:00 AM
I enjoyed this piece, congratulations!
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:16:00 PM
I think many of us are too often in Computer land. Congrats on your cool poem.
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Date: 4/16/2015 2:43:00 PM
Great poem Sharlotte - it is amazing how much we reply on computers for our everyday lives - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sharlotte Newan
Date: 4/17/2015 12:44:00 AM
THANK YOU

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