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Come She Said

I kissed her 'neath the silver birch "Come she said, we're missing church," I kissed her by the wishing well, "Come she said, I hear the bells." I kissed her by the old church gate "Come she said, or we'll be late." Beside the church on bended knee I asked my love to marry me. "Come she said let's go inside And yes my love, I'll be your bride." She kissed me as we ambled through, And quietly whispered, "I love you."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/5/2018 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my Rhyme Battle contest!
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/5/2018 6:29:00 PM
Thank you Juli-Michelle. :)
Date: 10/24/2018 2:49:00 PM
Your poem is so lovely and has such great rhythm. Very enjoyable and well-written. I'm happy I read this today. My best. Deb
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/24/2018 2:51:00 PM
Thank you Deb. :)
Date: 10/7/2018 8:26:00 AM
Gary, sweet lines with lovely rymes to show your happiness. Great!
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/7/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Runping :)
Date: 10/6/2018 6:43:00 PM
Perfect rhyme that flows from line to line. Best of luck in the contest Gary. : )
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/6/2018 6:49:00 PM
Thank you Connie :)
Date: 10/6/2018 5:50:00 PM
Goodness, Gary! perfect poem!
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/6/2018 5:51:00 PM
How kind James, thank you :)
Date: 10/6/2018 3:51:00 PM
Lovely piece Gary, very well penned with nice rhyme and flow. Have great day, Gordon
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/6/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you Gordon :)
Date: 10/6/2018 2:12:00 PM
Beautiful, Gary. Really well done. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/6/2018 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Barry :)
Date: 10/6/2018 1:52:00 PM
That is so sweet, Gary. Love it.
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/6/2018 1:54:00 PM
Thank you line :)

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