Come She Said

I kissed her 'neath the silver birch
"Come she said, we're missing church,"
I kissed her by the wishing well,
"Come she said, I hear the bells."

I kissed her by the old church gate
"Come she said, or we'll be late."
Beside the church on bended knee
I asked my love to marry me.

"Come she said let's go inside
And yes my love, I'll be your bride."
She kissed me as we ambled through,
And quietly whispered, "I love you."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Michelle Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my Rhyme Battle contest!
Smith Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Thank you Juli-Michelle. :)
Radke Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Your poem is so lovely and has such great rhythm. Very enjoyable and well-written. I'm happy I read this today. My best. Deb
Smith Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Thank you Deb. :)
Chen Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Gary, sweet lines with lovely rymes to show your happiness. Great!
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Runping :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Perfect rhyme that flows from line to line. Best of luck in the contest Gary. : )
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank you Connie :)
Goff Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 5:50 PM
Goodness, Gary! perfect poem!
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 5:51 PM
How kind James, thank you :)
Mcconnell Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Lovely piece Gary, very well penned with nice rhyme and flow. Have great day, Gordon
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Thank you Gordon :)
Stebbings Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Beautiful, Gary. Really well done. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Barry :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 1:52 PM
That is so sweet, Gary. Love it.
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Thank you line :)
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