Come Hell Or High Water

She looks out the window and sees him in the distance. 
So much fear inside leaves no room for resistance. 
If she ran right now she might be able to get away. 
With every broken rib she's nothing more than a cliche. 
She was once a strong woman, and could stand on her own. 
Now he's broken her will and more than one bone. 
Run, run, run her mind screams in shear terror. 
She unlocks the door without so much as a prayer. 
Maybe this time will be different and he won't be mad. 
Somehow she has to tell him he's about to be a dad. 
She should have taken that card and called the hot line. 
Her whole world changed as soon as she got the plus sign. 
If she can make it thru the night she'll pack up and leave. 
Somewhere deep inside she knows that's only make believe. 
She's his till the end, come hell or high water. 
There's nothing anyone can do about the oncoming slaughter.

                    The National Domestic Violence 
                          Hot Line 1-800-799-7233
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Chilling ~ hard to imagine this is a great depiction of many relationships. Superbly penned with a message that hits the bullseye. This poem is a fabulous addition to the 2020 PS Anthology. Bravo, Scott ~
Arnone Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Sometimes (like this time) your writing is so tight and dead-on. This would have been perfect for the Scare Me Good contest....
Williams Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 1:19 AM
Hey Tom, Sorry for the late reply. I missed this somehow. Your comments make me feel very special. I really appreciate them.
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 6:25 PM
a very bleak outcome foreseen in this one. It is a very good poem for national domestic violence, which is rampant in the U.S. I really like this.
Williams Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 5:38 AM
Thanks a lot Andrea. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my work. I know its not much, but if it helps even one person that's one less broken bone.
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Ok...yeah
Williams Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 5:35 AM
Yeah?
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Hi Scott, Congrats on "Your Dark Side of Love WIN!!!" XOX ~LINDA~
Williams Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Thank you so much Linda.
Onclaud Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:36 PM
so tearing!.. big congrats, scott!
Williams Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 7:39 AM
Thank you so much.
Cheema Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Congrats on your placement, Scott! Hell can't be avoided, but the helpline is there!
Cheema Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:48 AM
That's very thoughtful Scott! I wish I had one at the time I had seen domestic violence on Xmas night! ( in India)
Williams Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Thank you, Balveen.I hope it can help someone who desperately needs the help.
Gentry Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations on your win with this intense, sad, organized poem. Nice touch adding hotline #. There's so much help available yet so hard to see it when you're in it. Excellent! A 7
Williams Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 9:23 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. I really appreciate your feedback. It means a great deal to me.
Turner Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Well written, Scott. Congratulations on your win!
Williams Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Thank you, Daniel. I appreciate your kind words.
Hamilton Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:33 AM
great sensitivity Scott great pen congrats on 2nd place hugs
Williams Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Thank you Shadow. You've allowed a light to shine on a dark subject. Thank you.
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:14 AM
This was very sad and gripping for me. I've only had one broken bone...yep. Congratulations on your 2nd place with this one, Scott. ;)
Williams Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Thank you, Lin. I really appreciate your feedback.
Yuhas Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:18 PM
Very good write Scott, and it's all too often.
Williams Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 12:07 AM
Thanks a lot Pete for stopping by to read my work. I really appreciate your feedback.
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