Come Fly With Me (Reversed Verse)

High above the clouds
Across the midnight blue sky
Where winds soar freely 
~~
Where winds soar freely 
Across the midnight blue sky
High above the clouds
 




Authors Comments:
“The answers are blowing in the wind, sometimes we have to soar a little higher 
In order to reach the heights of listening”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 10/11/2008 10:35:00 PM
Your well on your way to the style of HAIKU. #1 fan
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Date: 9/23/2008 4:43:00 PM
I love this write, we have to fly high above to get and receive the message, grat write and thanks for your comments, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/22/2008 4:34:00 PM
So cleverly done and beautiful as well. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/22/2008 3:47:00 AM
I could not agree more, all answers can be found in the winds that carry the song of all that is! One just has to know how to listen, excellent! Love Kristin
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Date: 9/21/2008 7:48:00 PM
Nice one.
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Date: 9/21/2008 2:48:00 PM
This is so creative. Nice use of imagery. Amen to your post comment. What a wonderful use of this short format. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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Date: 9/21/2008 11:54:00 AM
Breathtaking imagery both ways! Your comment adds so much. A beautiful write Adell. Love your reversed verses! Love, Shar
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Date: 9/21/2008 7:58:00 AM
This is a cool Haiku Adell - The comment is perfect for the poem and vice-versa - Wonderful Poetry - God Bless
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