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Come Disappear

Rush your waves of freedom pulse slow where alcoves bleed lay gently in the grass of heaven amongst the humble and the meek Faint eyes lie down in blazing heat where the burning fades desire unfurled taught ropes entwine and boil steams still streams Unguide lost thoughts subsided roam the hallows of my lair run past fear of another morrow into me come disappear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/8/2017 8:36:00 PM
I love this poem.Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 8/3/2017 10:07:00 AM
Beautifully done Tim old boy...^WW^
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Date: 8/2/2017 3:47:00 PM
Love the rhythm Tim, it moves like a lyric, very well done.
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Date: 8/2/2017 3:24:00 PM
it's nice to simply flow and surrender.. nice one, tim..huggs
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Date: 8/2/2017 2:03:00 PM
Beautiful was to disappear! :)
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Date: 8/2/2017 2:01:00 PM
- Lovely and soft words that feel comforting - Together we can handle everything - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/2/2017 10:53:00 AM
Wow! Tim this is absolutely scintillating romance. To let those walls down and become one with another as you so skillfully wrote doesn't get any better than your piece. Loved this poem and a fav.
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Date: 8/2/2017 9:39:00 AM
Come disappear, very very beautiful. Run past fear....
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Date: 8/2/2017 8:54:00 AM
To be able to disappear inside another would be the epitome of love. "Roam the hallows of my lair," very suggestive line, Tim. Great verses.
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