Come Disappear

Rush your waves of freedom 
pulse slow where alcoves bleed
lay gently in the grass of heaven 
amongst the humble and the meek 
  
Faint eyes lie down in blazing heat 
where the burning fades desire 
unfurled taught ropes entwine 
and boil steams still streams   
  
Unguide lost thoughts subsided 
roam the hallows of my lair 
run past fear of another morrow 
into me come disappear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 8:36 PM
I love this poem.Have a nice evening my friend.
Warrior Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 10:07 AM
Beautifully done Tim old boy...^WW^
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 3:47 PM
Love the rhythm Tim, it moves like a lyric, very well done.
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 3:24 PM
it's nice to simply flow and surrender.. nice one, tim..huggs
Vaso Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 2:03 PM
Beautiful was to disappear! :)
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 2:01 PM
- Lovely and soft words that feel comforting - Together we can handle everything - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
B. Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 10:53 AM
Wow! Tim this is absolutely scintillating romance. To let those walls down and become one with another as you so skillfully wrote doesn't get any better than your piece. Loved this poem and a fav.
White Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:39 AM
Come disappear, very very beautiful. Run past fear....
Lane Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 8:54 AM
To be able to disappear inside another would be the epitome of love. "Roam the hallows of my lair," very suggestive line, Tim. Great verses.
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