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My imaginary resturant is painted sky blue. Please enter, let me entertain you. There is soft music playing. The kind I hope will get you swaying. Each table has an ocean view. Never booked out, always a few. Smiling faces take your order. The menu will include fresh lobster. The house wines are oh so mellow. Poured by a very handsome fellow. The chef is Italian and sings as he cooks. He has written a wonderful cookery book. Wholesome goodness served with flair. New dishes to try if you dare. Delectable delights of delicious tarts. Easy conversation before you part. Linger over fresh ground coffee. On paying the bill, offered a toffee. How soon can we all dine again? Let's meet you here next week my friends. 20/09/2016

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Date: 10/1/2017 8:42:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and description, Jean, just delightful! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/2/2017 5:17:00 AM
Morning Greg. It was a wonderful surprise. Thank you for your visits.
Date: 10/1/2017 12:43:00 AM
Hooray Jean! I am so happy to see this delightful poem took First place! Congratulations my friend! : )
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/1/2017 3:59:00 AM
You are so supportive of my efforts Connie. I truly appreciate it. I have since got rid of the Silly Billy..That was good , honest to God, out of tune fun!
Date: 9/30/2017 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations Jean, sounds like an inviting place, fine win...
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/30/2017 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. My X sister in law Mary and her husband Pat have run a very successful Italian restaurant locally for over 30 years. Truly still the best in town. It was easy to be inspired by what is to be found there.
Date: 9/29/2017 6:21:00 PM
Jean, congratulations on your trophy win with this wonderfully penned poem !
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/29/2017 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Constance.
Date: 9/29/2017 1:10:00 PM
Jean, this is a delightful poem. Congrats on your top win! Janice
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/29/2017 3:15:00 PM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 9/29/2017 10:02:00 AM
Brian, I just deleted your comment by mistake. Those smelling salts must have gone to my head. Again I must thank you for such an honour.
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/29/2017 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Jean,for your support to my contests.Best wishes with your creative endeavours
Date: 9/29/2017 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations, Jean on first place with this lovely poem. ...Fran
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/29/2017 9:59:00 AM
Now that I have recovered...thank you Francis.
Date: 1/23/2017 9:48:00 AM
Jean, your very descriptive couplets present such a relaxing dining atmosphere. Congratulations for your placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/23/2017 10:43:00 AM
Lovely to see you Sandra and thank you for your hugs.
Date: 1/23/2017 9:12:00 AM
Can I get a reservation as soon as possible? I 'm dying to be delighted by your wonderful restaurant...Lol...Awesome poem, Jean. Congratulations!
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/23/2017 10:59:00 AM
Sounds nice.
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/23/2017 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Afzal. How does 7pm Thursday sound?
Date: 1/22/2017 9:10:00 AM
I love couplets! this one is great! Congratulations, Jean! ...Fran
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/22/2017 10:59:00 AM
Thank you Fran. I like them too. Wanna share some stew?
Date: 1/22/2017 8:15:00 AM
I love this! Never booked out. I feel the easy pace of this place. Such a warm place! Let's meet there!! Congrts, Jean!
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/22/2017 10:58:00 AM
Looking like I best book two tables Kim. Would be delighted to see you there.
Date: 1/22/2017 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful poem Jean, congrats on your placement :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/22/2017 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Claudia.
Date: 10/6/2016 4:25:00 AM
Very soon. Need GPS data to find it, but since I am old fashioned, could you send directions please? Congratulations, Kai
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/6/2016 4:51:00 AM
From South Africa? Sure. But as you pass Lanzerote island, you must bring my favourite sea view with you, from the old town in Puerto Del Carmen. That OK Kai?
Date: 10/5/2016 4:46:00 PM
Your entry is delightful Jean. An uncrowded restaurant is my dream! Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! 7; )
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/5/2016 5:46:00 PM
There's a seat reserved for you too Connie.
Date: 10/3/2016 8:42:00 PM
Jean, congratulations on your win Hugs
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/4/2016 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Eve. I am thrilled to have it half way up the score sheet. I am usually the panting last entrty.
Date: 10/3/2016 1:46:00 PM
Congrats yummy
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/3/2016 2:08:00 PM
Yummy.....one of my favourite words. Thank you Wendy.
Date: 10/3/2016 8:49:00 AM
Hi Jean, I think I would enjoy this restaurant. Where is it? Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 10/3/2016 2:57:00 PM
Lol:-) Alexis
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/3/2016 9:03:00 AM
It's in my head Alexis. A mix of all my favourites.
Date: 10/3/2016 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Jean, lovely write! Sounds like a wonderland, wish to pay a visit here! there is warmth and smile here!fabulous!!enjoyed , love, Anu:)
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/3/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely warm comments Anulaxmi.
Date: 10/3/2016 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations, Jean on your placement. Care for a second date?
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/3/2016 8:37:00 AM
Only if you let me pay next time.
Date: 10/3/2016 7:18:00 AM
Beautiful restaurant Jean, congratulations on your placement:)-luloo
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/3/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thank you Laura
Date: 9/26/2016 4:46:00 PM
Now that sounds like a wonderful place to wine and dine, think I am due a trip to Donegal soon.
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/26/2016 5:51:00 PM
Be my guest...be my guest ....be my guest.....as the clock sang to the beauty Belle.
Date: 9/21/2016 11:47:00 PM
Now who could refuse an invitation like that! Wonderful poem!
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/22/2016 1:16:00 AM
Hi Arthur. I'm thinking how wonderful it would be to block book, and for us regulars here to meet there.
Date: 9/21/2016 10:08:00 AM
I'll have some of that wine and lobster but only if you will join me. Sounds like a wonderful atmosphere, Jean.
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/21/2016 3:51:00 PM
Meet you there next week my friend.
Date: 9/20/2016 10:28:00 PM
Can ì book a table for two x next week x sounds yummy
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/21/2016 1:24:00 AM
You may, and thank you for your costum Wendy.
Date: 9/20/2016 6:02:00 PM
Sounds like my kind of place. Enjoyed this piece :) Carol
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/21/2016 1:23:00 AM
Thank you Carol for dining with me.

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