Premiere Contest WinnerCome Dine With Me

My imaginary resturant is painted sky blue.
Please enter, let me entertain you.

There is soft music playing.
The kind I hope will get you swaying.

Each table has an ocean view.
Never booked out, always a few.

Smiling faces take your order.
The menu will include fresh lobster.

The house wines are oh so mellow.
Poured by a very handsome fellow.

The chef is Italian and sings as he cooks.
He has written a wonderful cookery book.

Wholesome goodness served with flair.
New dishes to try if you dare.

Delectable delights of delicious tarts.
Easy conversation before you part.

Linger over fresh ground coffee.
On paying the bill, offered a toffee.

How soon can we all dine again?
Let's meet you here next week my friends.


20/09/2016
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Barden Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Wonderful imagery and description, Jean, just delightful! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
Murray Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 5:17 AM
Morning Greg. It was a wonderful surprise. Thank you for your visits.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 12:43 AM
Hooray Jean! I am so happy to see this delightful poem took First place! Congratulations my friend! : )
Murray Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 3:59 AM
You are so supportive of my efforts Connie. I truly appreciate it. I have since got rid of the Silly Billy..That was good , honest to God, out of tune fun!
Smith Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations Jean, sounds like an inviting place, fine win...
Murray Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Thank you Charlie. My X sister in law Mary and her husband Pat have run a very successful Italian restaurant locally for over 30 years. Truly still the best in town. It was easy to be inspired by what is to be found there.
La France Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:21 PM
Jean, congratulations on your trophy win with this wonderfully penned poem !
Murray Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:21 PM
Thank you Constance.
Canerdy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 1:10 PM
Jean, this is a delightful poem. Congrats on your top win! Janice
Murray Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 3:15 PM
Thank you Janice.
Murray Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Brian, I just deleted your comment by mistake. Those smelling salts must have gone to my head. Again I must thank you for such an honour.
Strand Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Thanks Jean,for your support to my contests.Best wishes with your creative endeavours
Grasso Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations, Jean on first place with this lovely poem. ...Fran
Murray Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Now that I have recovered...thank you Francis.
Haight Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Jean, your very descriptive couplets present such a relaxing dining atmosphere. Congratulations for your placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
Murray Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Lovely to see you Sandra and thank you for your hugs.
Nusker Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Can I get a reservation as soon as possible? I 'm dying to be delighted by your wonderful restaurant...Lol...Awesome poem, Jean. Congratulations!
Nusker Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 10:59 AM
Sounds nice.
Murray Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Thank you Afzal. How does 7pm Thursday sound?
Grasso Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 9:10 AM
I love couplets! this one is great! Congratulations, Jean! ...Fran
Murray Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 10:59 AM
Thank you Fran. I like them too. Wanna share some stew?
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 8:15 AM
I love this! Never booked out. I feel the easy pace of this place. Such a warm place! Let's meet there!! Congrts, Jean!
Murray Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Looking like I best book two tables Kim. Would be delighted to see you there.
Polydoro Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Beautiful poem Jean, congrats on your placement :)
Murray Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Claudia.
Neumann Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 4:25 AM
Very soon. Need GPS data to find it, but since I am old fashioned, could you send directions please? Congratulations, Kai
Murray Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 4:51 AM
From South Africa? Sure. But as you pass Lanzerote island, you must bring my favourite sea view with you, from the old town in Puerto Del Carmen. That OK Kai?
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Your entry is delightful Jean. An uncrowded restaurant is my dream! Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! 7; )
Murray Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 5:46 PM
There's a seat reserved for you too Connie.
Roper Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Jean, congratulations on your win Hugs
Murray Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 5:06 AM
Thank you Eve. I am thrilled to have it half way up the score sheet. I am usually the panting last entrty.
Rycroft Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 1:46 PM
Congrats yummy
Murray Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Yummy.....one of my favourite words. Thank you Wendy.
Y. Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Hi Jean, I think I would enjoy this restaurant. Where is it? Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Y. Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 2:57 PM
Lol:-) Alexis
Murray Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 9:03 AM
It's in my head Alexis. A mix of all my favourites.
Nayak Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on your placement Jean, lovely write! Sounds like a wonderland, wish to pay a visit here! there is warmth and smile here!fabulous!!enjoyed , love, Anu:)
Murray Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thank you for your lovely warm comments Anulaxmi.
Turner Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations, Jean on your placement. Care for a second date?
Murray Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Only if you let me pay next time.
Scars Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 7:18 AM
Beautiful restaurant Jean, congratulations on your placement:)-luloo
Murray Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Laura
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September 26, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Now that sounds like a wonderful place to wine and dine, think I am due a trip to Donegal soon.
Murray Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Be my guest...be my guest ....be my guest.....as the clock sang to the beauty Belle.
Vaso Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Now who could refuse an invitation like that! Wonderful poem!
Murray Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Hi Arthur. I'm thinking how wonderful it would be to block book, and for us regulars here to meet there.
Turner Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 10:08 AM
I'll have some of that wine and lobster but only if you will join me. Sounds like a wonderful atmosphere, Jean.
Murray Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Meet you there next week my friend.
Rycroft Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Can ì book a table for two x next week x sounds yummy
Murray Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:24 AM
You may, and thank you for your costum Wendy.
B. Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Sounds like my kind of place. Enjoyed this piece :) Carol
Murray Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:23 AM
Thank you Carol for dining with me.
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