Come Dance

Come Dance


"Come dance with me", she said and smiled
And he fell off his chair.
He blushed and rose and all the while
He couldn't help but stare.

Prettiest thing he'd ever saw
Was askin' him to dance.
If he could only work his jaw,
He'd dern shore take a chance.

He led her 'round the floor with ease,
And fell in love right there.
She still recalls a gentle breeze,
But not a breath of air.

He gave up drinkin', runnin' 'round,
She filled up her hope chest.
He wouldn't lose what he had found,
She felt that she was blessed.
 
They bought a place just west of town
And filled it full of cows.
That ranch has never let them down,
They never broke their vows.

Now fifty years have come and passed,
They raised a crop of boys.
The grandkids all are girls at last,
They make a lot less noise.

He rocks upon the porch awhile,
Her voice comes from within.
He knows she says it with a smile,
"Come dance with me again."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/26/2017 12:27:00 PM
This is warm and touching - a story of friendship, love and commitment.
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Date: 6/11/2016 7:45:00 PM
A very heartwarming story of love! I enjoyed reading this poem very much with it's smooth flow and wonderful rhyme... Congrats on a great win, Larry!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/11/2016 10:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kelly !!
Date: 5/23/2016 4:51:00 AM
Very cute write kind of warms the heart! Congrats on your placement
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/23/2016 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, Brian!!
Date: 5/23/2016 12:34:00 AM
Larry, Congratulations and thank you for sharing a poem you are proud of. Stop by my latest blog "Innocent of All" and enjoy the warm smile. :) **SKAT**
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/23/2016 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, SKAT...on my way to "Innocent..."Larry
Date: 4/22/2016 11:12:00 AM
Sweet, tale of happiness, very nice Larry
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/22/2016 2:23:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Charlie!
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