Come Close To Me - Quietus

Come close to me, dearest sweet love. Hum echoes in my dreams Let me hear your voice from above, Elated as love seems. Each night I feel your kiss, Darling, you are my bliss, Hold me tight dear like this. I care for thee, Come close to me. Quietus
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Ricci Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Hello Victor. This is a little gem not to mention quiet beautiful to be shared between two special people. Your words say everything in such a loving and feeling way. This touches any heart who reads this. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I hope you are staying safe. I can't believe we are almost into February. Have a great and peaceful weekend. Love Peace and Blessings always.
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 3:20 PM
This is beautiful. Heartfelt and sincere, it reads with deepest love.
Edmonds  Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Lovely words Victor, nostalgic and lovingly romantic… Belle
Messina Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 3:02 AM
Your love for your wife shines in your poetry, my friend. I have to admit I needed the dictionary for "quietus" Very nice!
Callus Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Beautiful and romantic, Victor. I hardly ever come across the word quietus nowadays. I remember reading it somewhere in Shakespeare many years ago! ~ Regards // paul
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 7:51 AM
- Romantic and warm poem ... love it, Victor :) - hugs
May Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:22 AM
A blissful dream of love, Wonderful write Victor
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:09 AM
Beautifully romantic!
Seeker Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:09 AM
Oh wow! Title should be the refrain though ~ Come close to me. Beautifully penned Victor! An outstanding Quietus
Daniel Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 3:38 AM
Beautiful one, Victor, I do like this form very much:)
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 9:57 PM
Incredibly beautiful, and I can imagine, true as well. The depth of your love is undying, and precious Victor.
Ashley Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 6:25 PM
Dear Victor, the sad beauty of your poem captures my soulful imagination. The mingling of love and grief and dreams so exquisitely and intimately expressed. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Tor Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 4:40 PM
Beautifully written Victor your heart is a passionate one my friend...
Rose  Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Such a beautiful dream, best you don't want to awaken from it, Victor :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 2:08 PM
this is SO nice and I love the form too.
Buehler Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Sad, yet beautiful, romantic reflections, from the still of the night. Blessings.
Volumes Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 9:12 AM
Purely sublime Víctor, you evoke tender intimacy with your soulful words.
Cunningham Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Beautifully romantic Victor, when you finally awake you're in a happy mood for the rest of the day. Tom
Poet Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Victor, your writing is excellent. I felt both delight and sorrow when reading this moving poetry. Thank you for sharing it.
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Our loved ones come to visit in our dreams. Well felt. hugs eve
Pandit Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Victor. You shine in this form.
Kitchin Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 4:55 AM
Victor, a emotive poem with both grief and love, well penned.
Kendrick Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 3:17 AM
My mother would dream about my father after his passing and say it was like he was right there. I enjoyed reading your work passionate work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
George Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 1:55 AM
Wow, so romantic ! She must be listening to your lyrical outbursts, dear Victor ...
M  Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 1:45 AM
So simply sweet and lovely Victor! Debx
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