Come By the Sword, Die By the Sword

Blind I came toward the sharp and swift
Looking to escape confusing pain..

Lies drip warm..the honey sweet..
Just before truth's cold steel stab

So make it quick
Cut me here..
Why tear away
Again piece by piece
Leaving loves decay

One fatal swoop
The juggler vein
I'll keep my heart
For another day

So cut me here
Face to face
We'll leave the past where it lay
Blood spilled on yesterday's blade

2-6-2014
Come By The Sword, Die By The Sword Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/15/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thank you for the reply
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:25:00 AM
DONNA, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/15/2016 5:14:00 AM
Thanks SKAT....
Date: 2/6/2016 2:25:00 AM
Hi Donna, Congratulations, on your win. I wonder if you remember this contest "Come by the sword, Die by the sword?" Nice to see you take one of the top spots in Royal's old contest. LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2016 5:15:00 AM
Thank you Linda.....
Date: 2/10/2014 6:30:00 AM
I believe this one will do well. Very real feeling.
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Date: 2/9/2014 7:17:00 AM
This is a dark one full of tension, waiting for the blade. Fantastic write!
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Date: 2/7/2014 10:06:00 PM
A little macabre but a very good read.
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:13:00 PM
gosh, I don't even know what contest this is, but I would say you did a darn good job, Donna. So nice to see this new post from you today.
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Date: 2/7/2014 11:09:00 AM
donns!..such an intense write yet not overdone... enjoyed the language here; so contemporay and ferocious.. you slay me!... huggs
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Date: 2/7/2014 11:02:00 AM
Interesting work..Face to face not behind one's back..I haven't checked out this contest at least I don't think I have reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2014 8:20:00 AM
Hi there, like this take on the contest..the last line spoke to me..now, go get a transfusion and stay away from sharp objects.. good one Donna...BG
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Date: 2/7/2014 4:32:00 AM
Descriptive succinct lines my friend. I love the ending much. Lovely work dear Donna.
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Date: 2/7/2014 3:39:00 AM
great pen Donna gl in contest hugs
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Date: 2/7/2014 2:19:00 AM
Great ending...let the Past not destroy the Future...sober poetry...
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Date: 2/6/2014 11:53:00 PM
This is a brilliant write my friend! I truly loved reading this awesome poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/6/2014 10:39:00 PM
A complete surrender? Come on fight!
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