Home » Poems » Jack Horne » Come Back To Me

Come Back To Me

Come back to me
I can’t believe you’ve really gone
Come back to me
I dream of holding you again
My guiding light you always shone
My love for you goes on and on
Come back to me

lost loverondeau

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kash Poet

Date: 8/1/2011 1:50:00 PM

Congratulations jack on your win in Dr.Mehta's contest...enjoyed your poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2011 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/31/2011 9:12:00 PM

Nice Jack. Congratulations and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 7/31/2011 8:39:00 PM

Jack, Congratulations in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/31/2011 6:45:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS for the honorable mention~~~smile~~~*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2011 5:33:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your HM with these amazing entertaining words my friend.. luv it so..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/31/2011 5:24:00 PM

Agree with Andrea, I think this is one of the best in the contest, Jack. Congrats on your success. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2011 4:09:00 PM

Jack, I remember this one and really liking it. I'd have put it higher for sure. Congrats on the win.

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 7/31/2011 2:42:00 PM

A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/31/2011 2:20:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, jack

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2011 6:21:00 PM

Good one that reads like a winners' circle work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Yes, occasionally I get a nap also..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/25/2011 4:03:00 PM

Hey, Jack, it's about time you started posting some new poems! Thanks for your comments. Yes, the Christmas Condoms were a hoot. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/25/2011 3:33:00 PM

thankxx for reading so much of my poetry today Jack.. so glad u enjoyed luv.. appreciate the comments.. when system is still not quite right luv..

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/24/2011 2:24:00 PM

Hey Jack, I haven't been on much either..glad you enjoyed my "Unending Love". Thanks for reading and leaving your always kind comment. Always, Annalise

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 7/23/2011 4:18:00 PM

Love the emotion, love the metaphores....Old Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2011 11:06:00 AM

You told me they are pronounced the same. WE say gone with a an AH sound, like when you open your mouth at the dentist. haha. I hope this does well in Dr. Ram's contest. It's for him, right?(now I realize you had to say rondeau probably because rondelay was not mentioned as a form to post under!)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/21/2011 9:39:00 AM

I found this to be such a sad poem, and can't help but hope that certain somebody does come back! thanks for all your comments Jack and congrats as well on all your wins :D

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/21/2011 9:31:00 AM

this comes like a beautiful breath of spring, jack! love it with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette

Judy Ball

Date: 7/21/2011 7:19:00 AM

Jack this one is worthy of being in a greeting card. Love it. God Bless, JB

John Freeman

Date: 7/21/2011 5:51:00 AM

Cool Rondelet, Englnd swings. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2011 9:55:00 PM

Hmmm, is this rondelet or rondeau? You might be right. sometimes a form can have different definitions. It's different from the way I do them and look to me more like what Dr. Ram was asking us to do (that is one I need to learn!) I really like this one. So in England, does gone rhyme with shone. I find it interesting how our pronunciation of some words is very different!

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/20/2011 8:13:00 PM

I enjoyed this ...You will see her again...:)..hugs to you.

Kash Poet

Date: 7/20/2011 7:26:00 PM

Very nice...enjoyed.Best wishes jack.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/20/2011 7:10:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/20/2011 6:40:00 PM

lovely and romantic Jack.. I am wishing u good luck in the contest... after three rewrites on my Word Wizard I still think I goofed up .. but it is what it is luv... nice romance even though sad..

Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Come Back To Me

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources