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Come Back to me

Come back to me I can’t believe you’ve really gone Come back to me I dream of holding you again My guiding light you always shone My love for you goes on and on Come back to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/1/2011 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations jack on your win in Dr.Mehta's contest...enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 8/1/2011 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2011 9:12:00 PM
Nice Jack. Congratulations and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/31/2011 8:39:00 PM
Jack, Congratulations in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2011 6:45:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS for the honorable mention~~~smile~~~*-*junjun
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:33:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your HM with these amazing entertaining words my friend.. luv it so..
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:24:00 PM
Agree with Andrea, I think this is one of the best in the contest, Jack. Congrats on your success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/31/2011 4:09:00 PM
Jack, I remember this one and really liking it. I'd have put it higher for sure. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:42:00 PM
A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:20:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, jack
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Date: 7/25/2011 6:21:00 PM
Good one that reads like a winners' circle work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Yes, occasionally I get a nap also..Sara
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Date: 7/25/2011 4:03:00 PM
Hey, Jack, it's about time you started posting some new poems! Thanks for your comments. Yes, the Christmas Condoms were a hoot. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/25/2011 3:33:00 PM
thankxx for reading so much of my poetry today Jack.. so glad u enjoyed luv.. appreciate the comments.. when system is still not quite right luv..
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Date: 7/24/2011 2:24:00 PM
Hey Jack, I haven't been on much either..glad you enjoyed my "Unending Love". Thanks for reading and leaving your always kind comment. Always, Annalise
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Date: 7/23/2011 4:18:00 PM
Love the emotion, love the metaphores....Old Jack
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Date: 7/22/2011 11:06:00 AM
You told me they are pronounced the same. WE say gone with a an AH sound, like when you open your mouth at the dentist. haha. I hope this does well in Dr. Ram's contest. It's for him, right?(now I realize you had to say rondeau probably because rondelay was not mentioned as a form to post under!)
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:39:00 AM
I found this to be such a sad poem, and can't help but hope that certain somebody does come back! thanks for all your comments Jack and congrats as well on all your wins :D
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:31:00 AM
this comes like a beautiful breath of spring, jack! love it with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:19:00 AM
Jack this one is worthy of being in a greeting card. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/21/2011 5:51:00 AM
Cool Rondelet, Englnd swings. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:55:00 PM
Hmmm, is this rondelet or rondeau? You might be right. sometimes a form can have different definitions. It's different from the way I do them and look to me more like what Dr. Ram was asking us to do (that is one I need to learn!) I really like this one. So in England, does gone rhyme with shone. I find it interesting how our pronunciation of some words is very different!
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Date: 7/20/2011 8:13:00 PM
I enjoyed this ...You will see her again...:)..hugs to you.
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:26:00 PM
Very nice...enjoyed.Best wishes jack.
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:10:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Jack
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:40:00 PM
lovely and romantic Jack.. I am wishing u good luck in the contest... after three rewrites on my Word Wizard I still think I goofed up .. but it is what it is luv... nice romance even though sad..
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