Come Back To Me

Come back to me
I can’t believe you’ve really gone
Come back to me
I dream of holding you again
My guiding light you always shone
My love for you goes on and on
Come back to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Poet Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations jack on your win in Dr.Mehta's contest...enjoyed your poem.
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:12 PM
Nice Jack. Congratulations and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 8:39 PM
Jack, Congratulations in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
Villanueva Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 6:45 PM
CONGRATULATIONS for the honorable mention~~~smile~~~*-*junjun
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Congrats Jack on your HM with these amazing entertaining words my friend.. luv it so..
Devonshire Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:24 PM
Agree with Andrea, I think this is one of the best in the contest, Jack. Congrats on your success. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 4:09 PM
Jack, I remember this one and really liking it. I'd have put it higher for sure. Congrats on the win.
Ramsdale Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:42 PM
A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl
Mehta Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:20 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, jack
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Good one that reads like a winners' circle work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Yes, occasionally I get a nap also..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Hey, Jack, it's about time you started posting some new poems! Thanks for your comments. Yes, the Christmas Condoms were a hoot. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 3:33 PM
thankxx for reading so much of my poetry today Jack.. so glad u enjoyed luv.. appreciate the comments.. when system is still not quite right luv..
Haick Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Hey Jack, I haven't been on much either..glad you enjoyed my "Unending Love". Thanks for reading and leaving your always kind comment. Always, Annalise
Ross Jr. Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 4:18 PM
Love the emotion, love the metaphores....Old Jack
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 11:06 AM
You told me they are pronounced the same. WE say gone with a an AH sound, like when you open your mouth at the dentist. haha. I hope this does well in Dr. Ram's contest. It's for him, right?(now I realize you had to say rondeau probably because rondelay was not mentioned as a form to post under!)
K. Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 9:39 AM
I found this to be such a sad poem, and can't help but hope that certain somebody does come back! thanks for all your comments Jack and congrats as well on all your wins :D
Onclaud Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 9:31 AM
this comes like a beautiful breath of spring, jack! love it with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
Ball Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 7:19 AM
Jack this one is worthy of being in a greeting card. Love it. God Bless, JB
Freeman Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 5:51 AM
Cool Rondelet, Englnd swings. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Hmmm, is this rondelet or rondeau? You might be right. sometimes a form can have different definitions. It's different from the way I do them and look to me more like what Dr. Ram was asking us to do (that is one I need to learn!) I really like this one. So in England, does gone rhyme with shone. I find it interesting how our pronunciation of some words is very different!
Warden Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 8:13 PM
I enjoyed this ...You will see her again...:)..hugs to you.
Poet Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 7:26 PM
Very nice...enjoyed.Best wishes jack.
Mehta Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 7:10 PM
Thanks for the entry, Jack
Sweetheart Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 6:40 PM
lovely and romantic Jack.. I am wishing u good luck in the contest... after three rewrites on my Word Wizard I still think I goofed up .. but it is what it is luv... nice romance even though sad..
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