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Come Back To Me

Lying here at dawn empty arms longing for you, a new heart you've found. Morning embraces nightfall, true love has forsaken me.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/26/2013 11:43:00 PM

Hi Milton, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/28/2009 4:36:00 PM

for it was not true...and more love awaits you! GOOD tanka! tanka you!

Daver Austin

Date: 11/12/2009 8:53:00 AM

Another lover of the short form...wonderful write. Someone told me once that haiku lines are not capitalized...how about tanka. I profess, I always used to capitalize everything. LOve, daver

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/11/2009 12:45:00 AM

Touching my heart, this brought a tear.BG

Marty Owens

Date: 11/10/2009 5:01:00 PM

Very nice poem...enjoyed Tanka form...Marty

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/10/2009 4:33:00 PM

the only cure; new love as soon as possible. jhl

Malcolm Dyer

Date: 11/10/2009 4:29:00 PM

I like this form of poetry great write thanks for sharing