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Come Back To Me

Lying here at dawn
empty arms longing for you,
a new heart you've found.
Morning embraces nightfall,
true love has forsaken me.

lost lovelongingtanka

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Poet Destroyer A

November 26, 2013 at 11:43 PM

Hi Milton, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

November 28, 2009 at 4:36 PM

for it was not true...and more love awaits you! GOOD tanka! tanka you!

Daver Austin

November 12, 2009 at 8:53 AM

Another lover of the short form...wonderful write. Someone told me once that haiku lines are not capitalized...how about tanka. I profess, I always used to capitalize everything. LOve, daver