Come Back

COME BACK

	When I first meet you and took a look into your eyes, it was like destiny had pulled up
and it was time to ride. Overwhelmed by the feelings inside, but I couldn’t hide. You got
a good look into my soul and I knew you had me for I. I declined you like a credit card,
it was me being scared inside. Found out that my heart wasn’t in it and I wasn’t really
ready to ride. Then I realized that I made a grave mistake, besides feeling like all I do
is want to get back to you. Always feeling the rush of defeat not sure with no way to go.
Hoping and praying that one day you would make it back to me. Almost on the edge of losing
all hope, feeling so down and low it’s becoming torture to my soul. Everyday to come will
be the worst ones, and my life will never be the way it should have been.
I PRAY AND HOPE WITH ALL MY HEART THAT YOU WILL MAKE IT BACK TO ME, AND WHAT WE HAD WAS TRUE!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/6/2010 9:18:00 AM
Congratulation on your worthy feature Wilfordj. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/5/2010 5:12:00 PM
Congrad's on your feature! an interesting write! Light & Love
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Date: 2/5/2010 12:54:00 PM
I like the prose way of writting poetry, you have unique way to compare the credit card, great metophor and smilie . Good poem to read, emotional. Congrats on being featured this week. Judy Riley
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Date: 2/5/2010 10:46:00 AM
Ccngratulations on your write being featured this week. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:54:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:46:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:44:00 AM
From "Featured Poet" to super souper... welcome my friend.....:JP]
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:39:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Wilfordj. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/28/2010 5:10:00 PM
Hey Wilfordj, Great write. Welcome to PS! Please keep writing and as you read and leave comments on the works of other they'll do the same for you and your gift will grow while you're having fun! This sounds like what I've experienced recently. Read, "Time Rests, Captured" when you have the time. I too was very afraid but I was haunted by these feelings I've never had before and I have given in. Wish me luck! Peace, Audrey
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