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Come and See

Warm breezes upon pale cheeks song birds chirping in oak trees yellow daises and pure white calla lilies calls out from nature, "come and see" Come and see my beauty my vibrant greens and blues Come and see me smile I'm refreshed, cleansed and new Come and see my apple blossoms exploding on my limbs come and float away with them cascading across heaven's wings Come and smell my fragrance as I wrap my love around your sheets walk on through my gardens in one of my many glorious retreats Come and taste my magic so wet and pure and clean flowing down my mountainsides quenching thirsts of all that's seen Come and feel my glory Come and see my sky Come share my gifts and pleasures Come hold my hand and fly

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Date: 4/21/2015 11:53:00 PM
How can anyone be this cheerful all the time! I revolt! I will finish this title!!!!! ( Tim, this is simply another great beautiful poem, that did in fact inspire me on the dark side )
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Date: 4/20/2015 6:16:00 PM
The first line introduces this gem perfectly and the last line closes it the same way...No Spring here in South Louisiana to speak of...We go straight from a few cold snaps to long, hot and humid summers...Good stuff my friend! - Tim
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Date: 4/21/2015 2:32:00 PM
Thanks Tim...have a blessed day
Date: 4/20/2015 2:18:00 PM
a very charming spring poem. Gosh< I am seeing so many spring like poems today. Maybe some contest is going on? Anyway, I really like this, Tim.
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Date: 4/21/2015 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Andrea...I don't think there is one but I'm sure there will be one soon...Tim
Date: 4/20/2015 1:32:00 PM
Delightfully written Tim as I'm taken amidst beautiful Spring vista. Nice, very nice, James :) :)
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Date: 4/20/2015 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so much my good friend...cheers Tim
Date: 4/20/2015 10:47:00 AM
A buttery delicacy that, rolls off of the tongue and splashes upon the page to, create a lovely pastoral scene. Excellent and I give it a "7".
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Date: 4/20/2015 1:53:00 PM
A buttery delicacy...I love that M.L. ..... thanks Tim
Date: 4/20/2015 3:38:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Tim - Spring is my favorite time :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/20/2015 1:51:00 PM
Thanks A-L it is a grand time with everything fresh and new.
Date: 4/20/2015 1:01:00 AM
Exceptional beauty makes me wanna fly and touch the view.A favourite..Charma
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Date: 4/20/2015 1:50:00 PM
Yes yes yes Charmu I will join you on that flight....hugs Tim
Date: 4/19/2015 10:28:00 PM
Gifts of nature are so wonderful, n u hv put them beautifully in ur captivating write Tim! Great work!
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Date: 4/20/2015 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Upma..I have to visit you soon...I have been so busy...Tim
Date: 4/19/2015 10:01:00 PM
Nature poems and poems about Spring always are on my list to read and enjoy. This one in free verse is exceptional as its as vibrant is that season. You nailed this one my friend. A7.
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Date: 4/20/2015 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Robert. I am a huge fan of nature and all she brings....Tim
Date: 4/19/2015 9:19:00 PM
Tim - I've seen many poems about spring now that it's here. But this one has a refreshing approach. Nice job.
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Date: 4/20/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thank you very much Wally....Tim
Date: 4/19/2015 7:17:00 PM
You painted a true picture of the season, Tim. Thanks for a great read xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/19/2015 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Thvia....have a blessed night Tim

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