Come Along and Wish With Me

My first wish would be to help children 
Around the world__meet all their needs
Be it need for basics like food, clothing
Or shelter from the cold, water, __meds

This would include children in the states
Who in the city sometimes aren't safe
Then my second wish for elderly
Would be for love__ care continually

Then something for me that I long for
Health and strength to be able to care
For my family as needs arise
Granted these wishes__ life would improve

Wishes for children all around world
Love and care for elderly__last me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/2/2010 6:51:00 AM
Wonderful thoughtful three wishes Sara, many congratulations on your win in Amy's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:21:00 AM
i wish for others and strength for ourselves to help others even more, lovely wishes sara (: and congrats
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Date: 4/30/2010 7:40:00 PM
Excellently presented, Sara, congrats! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/29/2010 9:02:00 PM
Nice wishes. A nicer poem. Nice finish in a nice contest. To sum it up...NICE.
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:33:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your HM in Amy's Wishes contest .. a wonderful honor for some wonderful wishes...enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/28/2010 9:23:00 PM
Beautiful and so very touching. you are so right and we do need to help each other more. We seem to busy to give a kind word or a helping hand. Terrific work.
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:21:00 AM
enjoyed
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Date: 4/27/2010 2:29:00 AM
Sara very worthy wishes and wonderfully penned...I wish you good luck always in everything you do...Many thanks for all your kind comments, have a lovely day.....Allie
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Date: 4/26/2010 6:20:00 AM
Wonderful wishes and wish they all come true especially your last two lines so full of luv and care... the elderly are so pushed aside in our society and always last it seems..good luck in the contest by Amy Green and thankxxx for your encouraging words on my entry as well..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/26/2010 3:58:00 AM
Nice wishes for all- 1 million children out of 5 million are not getting enough to eat here in America! and I thought of those rocks as people looking outwards for some unexplained reason
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Date: 4/26/2010 3:49:00 AM
Wow, Sara, my uncle dies this January at the age of 98 (he wanted even to celebrate his 100th birthday, but his wife had died by end of last year so he probably died of grief. So many well wishes in your Sonnet, Sara! Even in Germany are many poor children who needed some care...Gert
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Date: 4/25/2010 7:26:00 PM
to help children.thats a wonderful wish.im not surprised such a wish came from you. good luc always. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/25/2010 11:44:00 AM
very nice write and very special wishes good luck in the contest very well done all the best to you faleshia
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Date: 4/25/2010 11:18:00 AM
good luck int the wishing contest a nice triplet on wishes,..p.d.
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Date: 4/25/2010 8:30:00 AM
Wish you good luck in the contest. Fine thoughts nicely expressed
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