Come4tunes and Comfort Me - My Frenemy's Best Birthday Wishes

2day once more was fun day, because the sun was there:
Of course! Like all the sundays, as usually they were...
if only you were there 4 me, and not 4 all together!
The sun has gone, and in the mood, it's moon day that begins 

and all around the ticking sounds that I hear all around me,
there's suddenly my Blackberry: a ringtone's sent to me.
As yesterday was 'gain your birthday, told the ringtone sent to me,
As usual, I'm sending you 4 tunes to comfort me;

because I know that once again, as for many a birthday
you surely still are thinking of the things that run the same way:
There is The Sun, there is The Belle and Moon day !s their frenemy's day;

and I am used to sail away for it's too hard to see
that your stubborness clings to him and it won't let us be...
Goodbye, my love; I hope next year you'll come4tunes to comfort me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 12:39 PM
hey, i see I owe you a very belated congrats on this interesting sonnet form text message!! Nicely done, and on my Scoundrel poem, I just invented that situation. but I did know a guy who was a bit like him in my life!!
Squyres Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Texting and sharing music on a phone...delightful poem...though a little sad. Blessings !!
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 12:10 PM
Thank you, Debra!
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 11:42 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 9:25 AM
CONGRATS ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS MARVELOUS ENTRY LUV ..
Grisetti Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 8:14 AM
Like the texting use in your sonnet. Congratulations.
Brown Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on your HM in Cyndi's contest Voahanitriniaina. Love, Carol XXXX
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