Combustible

my, my...
what a sublime feeling this is!
a surging current
of divine electricity
traveling 
through our bone marrows.
oh, I feel it deeply,
so strongly,
as do others.
there's no mistaking
the chemistry between us.
together
we create
a reverberating earthquake.
we're but a spark
in a stick of dynamite
about to...
blow!


Date written: 07/24/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 10:32 PM
What power charged poem of romance.... so combustible ! A well deserved win dear friend ! Belated Congratulations !
Ibeh Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 5:49 AM
Thank you very much indeed!
Calasibetta Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 3:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. I love the electricity here~powerfully exhilarating. Kudos. :)Paulette
Ibeh Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Thank you very much, Paulette:-)
Canerdy Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 3:25 PM
Edward, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
Ibeh Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 1:09 AM
Thank you so much, Janice:-)
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 8:26 AM
No mistaking the spark of love--emotions exude love felt deeply.
Ibeh Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 1:09 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
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