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Combustible

my, my...
what a sublime feeling this is!
a surging current
of divine electricity
traveling 
through our bone marrows.
oh, I feel it deeply,
so strongly,
as do others.
there's no mistaking
the chemistry between us.
together
we create
a reverberating earthquake.
we're but a spark
in a stick of dynamite
about to...
blow!


Date written: 07/24/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 8/2/2022 10:32:00 PM
What power charged poem of romance.... so combustible ! A well deserved win dear friend ! Belated Congratulations !
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/3/2022 5:49:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed!
Date: 7/30/2022 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. I love the electricity here~powerfully exhilarating. Kudos. :)Paulette
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/30/2022 7:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paulette:-)
Date: 7/26/2022 3:25:00 PM
Edward, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/28/2022 1:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, Janice:-)
Date: 7/24/2022 8:26:00 AM
No mistaking the spark of love--emotions exude love felt deeply.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/28/2022 1:09:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

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