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Oh! I miss your spontaneous laughter, the mischievous, bright glint in your eyes; everything around you is quiet just like my heart which silently cries. I wish you could acknowledge my words and respond when I gently touch you. No-one now bothers to kiss away my tears as they unrelenting flow; for I fear that you will never wake and that I would be alone again in the dark and the frightening nights - alone with my sorrow and pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/7/2013 7:03:00 PM
David, i hope you don't fall in to this path of pain and darkness. thank you for sharing your deepest emotions. I don't know this feeling yet, I keep the kisses and hugs alive, .. maybe one day they fall into a sleep, and I will be the one falling into this kind of sorrow.. I hope this is just a poem.... always~ LINDA
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David De La Croes
Date: 5/8/2013 4:12:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, Linda. It expresses the feelings of a good friend of mine... Greetings, David
Date: 5/7/2013 11:28:00 AM
This is sad and a heartfelt write... Well done David~A.O
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David De La Croes
Date: 5/8/2013 4:10:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, OA... David
Date: 5/7/2013 5:59:00 AM
- David, so sad - a terrible fate - gorgeous, written with love and hope. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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David De La Croes
Date: 5/7/2013 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Have a good day! David

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