David De La Croes Poet Free verse

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Oh! I miss your spontaneous laughter,
the mischievous, bright glint in your eyes;
everything around you is quiet
just like my heart which silently cries.
I wish you could acknowledge my words
and respond when I gently touch you.
No-one now bothers to kiss away
my tears as they unrelenting flow;
for I fear that you will never wake
and that I would be alone again
in the dark and the frightening nights -
alone with my sorrow and pain.

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Poet Destroyer A May 7, 2013 at 7:03 PM David, i hope you don't fall in to this path of pain and darkness. thank you for sharing your deepest emotions. I don't know this feeling yet, I keep the kisses and hugs alive, .. maybe one day they fall into a sleep, and I will be the one falling into this kind of sorrow.. I hope this is just a poem.... always~ LINDA David De La Croes May 8, 2013 at 4:12 AM Thank you for your comments, Linda. It expresses the feelings of a good friend of mine... Greetings, David

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 7, 2013 at 11:28 AM This is sad and a heartfelt write... Well done David~A.O David De La Croes May 8, 2013 at 4:10 AM Thanks for your visit and comment, OA... David

Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2013 at 5:59 AM - David, so sad - a terrible fate - gorgeous, written with love and hope. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) David De La Croes May 7, 2013 at 6:28 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Have a good day! David