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Coltrane's Jazzzzzzz

bring it on! ripple hammer and thrum yellow bees buzz electric nuclear flaming freely notes flying fizzle sizzle crackling deep-throated husky honey run in golden warm fuzzy tones seductive tingling sweet vanilla sauce silky sticky smooth caramel flowing free his saxophone slapping cool air sparkling colors supersonic and flaring like fireworks vibrant vibration tumbling tingling toes pulsing souls resonating so deeply captivating scintillating thrilling C O L T R A N E Rewrite - May 22, 2020 Brians Choice Q Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brain Strand

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/30/2020 12:55:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... the content and the form in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/30/2020 8:40:00 AM

Thank you for your comment and kind wishes! Same to you Beata. Lonna

Elaine George

Date: 11/29/2020 8:59:00 PM

WOW! This is very unique and creative, dear Lonna. Congrats! ~ Elaine

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/30/2020 8:40:00 AM

Thank you Elaine! Lonna

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2020 11:59:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it. Sara

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/30/2020 8:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara! Lonna

John Watt

Date: 11/29/2020 11:52:00 AM

Great shape poem, Lonna! I love all your tasty phrases, your love for jazz and Coltrane in particular come shining through this delightful write. My son gave me his "Giant Steps" CD last year for Christmas - love it! Congrats on your win ~ John

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/30/2020 8:56:00 AM

Good to hear from you John. Hope you had a great Thanksgiving! Lonna

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2020 11:30:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Lonna :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/30/2020 8:56:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine! Lonna

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/29/2020 5:16:00 AM

very cool... congratulations on your win!

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/30/2020 8:57:00 AM

Thank you Sandra! Lonna

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/23/2020 1:39:00 PM

Way cool, Lonna! Amazing imagery - "silky sticky smooth caramel," "sweet vanilla sauce," "deep throated husky honey." The merging of music and food images is so creative. Delicious! And I love the shape! Congratulations on your first place win! Really love this.

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/24/2020 2:49:00 PM

Jazz is a pretty tasty language! Thanks for the read and great comments Sam!

Sand Blown

Date: 6/20/2019 9:30:00 PM

why...you jazz cannibal you : ) good one

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/20/2019 10:56:00 PM

Tee Hee..................Thanks!

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/20/2019 8:44:00 PM

Indeed! Oh, this is as delectable as it is beautiful, Lonna. I just love last line for a grand finale to this enthralling poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/20/2019 9:02:00 PM

Thank you so much! My first try in this style - it was great fun.