Lonna Blodgett Poet Concrete

Coltrane's Jazzzzzzz

bring it on! ripple
                                                                  hammer and thrum
                                                                  yellow bees buzz
                                                                  electric
                                                                  nuclear
                                                                  flaming
                                                                  freely
                                                                  notes
                                                                  flying
                                                                  fizzle
                                                                  sizzle
                                                                  crackling
                                         deep-throated husky honey
                                       run in golden warm fuzzy tones
                                    seductive tingling sweet vanilla sauce
                                   silky sticky smooth caramel flowing free
                                   his saxophone slapping cool air sparkling
                                  colors supersonic and flaring like fireworks
                                    vibrant vibration tumbling tingling toes
                                        pulsing souls resonating so deeply
                                         captivating scintillating thrilling
                                                  C  O  L  T  R  A  N  E





Rewrite - May 22, 2020
Brians Choice Q Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brain Strand

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Beata Agustin November 30, 2020 at 12:55 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... the content and the form in your awesome poetic style. God bless you. Lonna Blodgett November 30, 2020 at 8:40 AM Thank you for your comment and kind wishes! Same to you Beata. Lonna

Elaine George November 29, 2020 at 8:59 PM WOW! This is very unique and creative, dear Lonna. Congrats! ~ Elaine Lonna Blodgett November 30, 2020 at 8:40 AM Thank you Elaine! Lonna

Sara Kendrick November 29, 2020 at 11:59 AM Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it. Sara Lonna Blodgett November 30, 2020 at 8:41 AM Thank you so much Sara! Lonna

John Watt November 29, 2020 at 11:52 AM Great shape poem, Lonna! I love all your tasty phrases, your love for jazz and Coltrane in particular come shining through this delightful write. My son gave me his "Giant Steps" CD last year for Christmas - love it! Congrats on your win ~ John Lonna Blodgett November 30, 2020 at 8:56 AM Good to hear from you John. Hope you had a great Thanksgiving! Lonna

Anne-Lise Andresen November 29, 2020 at 11:30 AM - Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Lonna :) - // Anne-Lise :) Lonna Blodgett November 30, 2020 at 8:56 AM Thank you Sunshine! Lonna

Sandra Adams November 29, 2020 at 5:16 AM very cool... congratulations on your win! Lonna Blodgett November 30, 2020 at 8:57 AM Thank you Sandra! Lonna

Sam Kauffman May 23, 2020 at 1:39 PM Way cool, Lonna! Amazing imagery - "silky sticky smooth caramel," "sweet vanilla sauce," "deep throated husky honey." The merging of music and food images is so creative. Delicious! And I love the shape! Congratulations on your first place win! Really love this. Lonna Blodgett May 24, 2020 at 2:49 PM Jazz is a pretty tasty language! Thanks for the read and great comments Sam!

Sand Blown June 20, 2019 at 9:30 PM why...you jazz cannibal you : ) good one Lonna Blodgett June 20, 2019 at 10:56 PM Tee Hee..................Thanks!

Susan Ashley June 20, 2019 at 8:44 PM Indeed! Oh, this is as delectable as it is beautiful, Lonna. I just love last line for a grand finale to this enthralling poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Lonna Blodgett June 20, 2019 at 9:02 PM Thank you so much! My first try in this style - it was great fun.