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Colours Spring To Life

the carpet of snow
inch by inch disappears
earth covered with sleep
ever so gently awakens

the thaw sets in motion
streams gurgling and tingling
and birds rush home to nest
while colours of spring come to life



AP: Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on March 26, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MAR 28) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
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Tarpey Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 4:44 AM
yes!
Gauthier Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 9:07 PM
Thank you, Patrick. Most appreciated ~ lol
Gilmour Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 10:18 PM
Spring awakening before my very eyes ~ how delightful Line ~with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Thanks, Ann ~ have a lovely week !
Brul Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 8:41 PM
What a delicate expression...I love the" birds rush home to nest" Lovely imagery! Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 8:49 PM
Thank you so much, JCB ~
Kulkarni Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 2:56 PM
Sweet use of words!
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 7:00 AM
Thank you, Smita ~
Krutsinger Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 3:48 AM
"streams girgling and tingling" So much imagery that makes me yearn for a brook.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 5:59 AM
thanks, Caren
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 10:09 PM
Beautiful imagery and emotional feel, Line a fav.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 5:59 AM
thank you so much, Eve ~
Merryman Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 7:24 PM
Line, your words paint a beautiful picture! congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 10:18 PM
Thank you very much, Kim ~
Kiser Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Oh yes, beautiful imagery here; well done and good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 7:08 AM
thanks, ML ~
George   Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:11 PM
I love the season of Spring when everything comes back to life. Your poem is as beautiful as Spring itself.
Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 1:43 AM
Thank you so much, Elaine ~
Devonshire Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Through your description, I can see winter's farewell so well, Line. You must be ready for spring by now. Best wishes in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 1:44 AM
Thanks, Carolyn ~ much appreciated
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:50 AM
This is wonderful Line. The description here is excellent and love the pic. Going into my faves. God Bless, JB
Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 1:44 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Judy ~
Cunningham Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:56 AM
You captured springs arrival well line, everything coming back to life. Hope you're well. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 1:44 AM
Thank you so much, Tom. Best wishes ~
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