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"Colours in a Cloud Speak" The colours of a world speak no one has time to listen The spectrums speak like music, lucid like clouds that pulse ultraviolet in front of you through wide open windows, unavoidable, some strange dream your eyes see, but do not speak the unbelieved reels in the unbelievable we live in these odd times we observe meanings subliminal that no one else other than we in our own moment believe, could see on the peripheral of even like odd evening clouds in the small hours that pulse curious purple, then ultraviolet, points of calculus invading our small space, try reasoning watching us as we move in some strange elusive dream a beacon calling us home, some strange home calls us crazy, we are cats cradles cartwheeling unreachable we think, it exists somewhere else, other than this, in the in between unseen we exist we dream we try to live what we see, is not real, it’s spun like fairy floss in the machinations of the others' schemes sugar tastes sweet addictive, we are lost in the after taste wanting more of what we know is their drug what we are taught from birth to see, is not the real of reality our minds are locked from time of rebirth, re-entry into well-rehearsed territory birth pains burning the inevitability, truth hits us the gravity glitching karma circles Ferris wheels that stop occasionally to let us get on get off it could be realer than real the mysterious colour hidden in clouds we touch in our dreams we are like comets falling (LadyLabyrinth / 2022) cat's cradle noun a child's game in which a loop of string is put around and between the fingers and complex patterns are formed. Harry Chapin - Cats in the Cradle

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Date: 12/19/2022 10:31:00 AM
A wonderful write/ending "in our dreams we are like comets falling." I remember the cat's cradle a child's game. I never played it. I also remember Harry Chapin song "Cats in the Cradle." Blessing going your way..............
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Date: 11/26/2022 10:01:00 PM
your eyes see/but do not /speak the unbelieved/reels in the/unbelievable When I see what I can't speak... I need to listen, get on the ferris wheel, or at least observe gettings on and off ... this poem reminds me.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/27/2022 7:45:00 AM
indeed.
Date: 11/25/2022 4:31:00 PM
Hello Ladvrinth, I do remember the game cat's cradle. I played that game often. this poem is beautiful. It will be my fa\v. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/26/2022 5:25:00 AM
https://youtu.be/LjJ9TDdQUdY
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/26/2022 4:12:00 AM
Hello Ladyrinth, I also enjoy classical music. Hugs
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 4:37:00 PM
Thank you. Chapin's song fits well with the poem. As for the game, it's complex and creative. xx
Date: 11/25/2022 5:49:00 AM
Forgotten Reality/Icke.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 4:50:00 PM
https://youtu.be/pv5D9YRx4VQ
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Date: 11/25/2022 4:49:00 PM
Trap/Icke.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 3:30:00 PM
https://youtu.be/FbujFvg0Y2k
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 5:49:00 AM
Electricity/Vibrations/Frequencies - Icke. - https://youtu.be/1WbJsHopCR4
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 5:49:00 AM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/David_Icke
Date: 11/25/2022 5:44:00 AM
Purple Light.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 3:18:00 PM
https://youtu.be/yxHH33ZpngE
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 3:14:00 PM
https://youtu.be/rXoLJAEHoew
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 3:03:00 PM
https://youtu.be/sLFYIROHpIU
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 2:59:00 PM
https://youtu.be/xA6ohzdAxAM
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 5:44:00 AM
https://youtu.be/SMrLjkBpTyU
Date: 11/25/2022 5:39:00 AM
Strange Purple Light.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 5:43:00 AM
similar to strange purple light I saw in clouds, 12.30am, Fri 25.11.22, Sydney - https://youtube.com/shorts/H370II8MhKA?feature=share
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 5:41:00 AM
https://youtu.be/AGZZktBos1M
Date: 11/25/2022 5:25:00 AM
"Go Home"/ Angela Olsen.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 2:46:00 PM
LYRICS/ "Go Home", Angel Oslen. - https://genius.com/Angel-olsen-go-home-lyrics
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 5:25:00 AM
https://youtu.be/N9oA2fshdAs
Date: 11/25/2022 5:24:00 AM
"Cats in the Cradle"/ Harry Chapin.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/25/2022 5:24:00 AM
https://youtu.be/puJt66y0TBw