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Colours

Colours


Would that the world was black and white
no colours, or their hues, to blur the sight
all things, quick sorted, left or right.

No nuance of the eye, or mind
nor deviation from the norm, to find
hidden in the muted edge of graying line.

Is there no peace within unshaded lie,
no colour twixt the harshness of cold dye
save the blotted smear as colours dry.

Who drained the colour, stole from break of day
that which drew the colours home to stay,
condemned us to this black and white display,

Sucked from love the crimson red of heart
tamed the variance of sweet and tart
hit the bullseye with a dull and tasteless dart.

What if the colours should some day return
to fulfill the dreams for which we yearn
would it then be black and white we scorn?


for Shadow Hamilton 
contest - Colours
6/26/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/27/2014 8:25:00 PM
congrats on a great win, John. I can't imagine a world without all it's brilliant colors... hugs.. Arlene
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John Lawless
Date: 6/28/2014 8:51:00 AM
In the "Wizard of Oz" everything is in black and white until Dorothy lands in Oz. And OH boy...what a dash of color does. Thanks for you support and comments.
Date: 6/27/2014 7:36:00 AM
The black and white of, "How Sweeeeeeet It Is"
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John Lawless
Date: 6/27/2014 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Judy for reading and checking in. Always nice to hear a new voice from the "soup"
Date: 6/27/2014 6:58:00 AM
What a unique view, I dig it, well done, and great win :)
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John Lawless
Date: 6/27/2014 7:04:00 AM
Yeah, I've always tried to look at life without the blinders of reality. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 6/27/2014 6:55:00 AM
Congrats, John, it is superb!!
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John Lawless
Date: 6/27/2014 7:02:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words
Date: 6/26/2014 9:10:00 PM
A unique one John ,, very lovely ! Congrats on deserved top place !
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John Lawless
Date: 6/26/2014 9:43:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, reading and commenting, always appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2014 8:31:00 PM
Awesome win and a very unique entry!! Congrats, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/26/2014 9:42:00 PM
Thank you it is always nice to be in the rarified atmosphere of such talented company.
Date: 6/26/2014 8:03:00 PM
John that was a lovely write on colors. congrats for the top win. Mohan
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John Lawless
Date: 6/26/2014 9:37:00 PM
Thank you, always good to hear from someone new to me on the soup.
Date: 6/26/2014 7:55:00 PM
Yes, you have unusual take on the theme. Congrats on the 1st place win, John
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John Lawless
Date: 6/26/2014 9:36:00 PM
I escaped the box and torched the box factory and now run free with an unfettered muse. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 6/26/2014 5:16:00 PM
Unusual take John that caught my eye and imagination congrats on 1st place ty for entering hugs
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John Lawless
Date: 6/26/2014 9:35:00 PM
Shadow, I had some fun with this as black and white are the absence and presence of all color. Thank you for the contest prompt and for your dedication and hard work.

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