Colours

She wore blue tights on the Monday Tuesday it was green Bright orange on the Wednesday Thursday it was cream I predicted black for the Friday She wore trousers Hate that girl.

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Charity Johnson

Date: 8/14/2023 10:11:00 AM

This is an interesting poem :) Good job :)

Paul Bell
Date: 8/14/2023 1:56:00 PM

Interesting week. lol

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 5/29/2023 7:43:00 AM

lol. Thanks Paul, very cute.

Paul Bell
Date: 5/29/2023 8:54:00 AM

Lost me ten pounds on that.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/20/2023 9:37:00 PM

I guess those jeans didn't come in black...

Paul Bell
Date: 5/21/2023 3:33:00 AM

They didn't.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2023 11:26:00 AM

Haha. That was such a cool ending

Paul Bell
Date: 5/15/2023 2:16:00 AM

She knew her stuff. lol

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/13/2023 8:39:00 AM

You gotta know, jeans at least one day a week. LOL Fun read, Paul.

Paul Bell
Date: 5/14/2023 1:11:00 AM

Know that the next time I bet on her. lol

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/13/2023 5:22:00 AM

good job you didn't say knickers lol

Paul Bell
Date: 5/14/2023 1:13:00 AM

I know, can you imagine losing twenty quid on her tights, then getting jailed for up skirting. lol