Colourification

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Oh, Burdock! Let me see spring's fuchsia Against sapphire skies touched with clouds bistre Let ivory raindrops flow from clouds lackluster To nurture emerald hallelujahs Let thy fuchsia slowly fade turn to a ball An emerald ball filled with seeds, ideas Ideas vermillion, spicy mixed strias Ready to release come amber of fall When lilac blooms the awesome althea Let bistre seed spill upon the ripe earth Love as warm as ginger will it soon birth The fall of life our love's panacea Our spring's fuchsia turned into emerald Silver winter turned soft rose petal gentle Sonnet attempted to be written in Romanticism style.. Sponsor: Silent One Written: March 15, 2016 Colors Used: Yellow: amber Blue: sapphire Red: vermillion White: Ivory Purple: Lilac Green: Emerald Black/brown: Bistre Pink: Fuchsia Orange: Ginger Gray: Silver

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2016 12:07:00 AM

Sara K, Congratulations on your awesome "Colourfication Win." ~LINDA~

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/22/2016 7:42:00 PM

Hi Sara, a beautifully crafted and well written poem. Your colours shine in the sun and your words paint a beautiful canvas. Congratulations on your win in the contest. I am putting this little gem in my faves.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/23/2016 6:07:00 PM

I am honored that you would fav this one..Thanks so much for that and dropping by..Sara

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/17/2016 1:12:00 AM

P.S. I don't know if you ever get notified or not, but I do respond to your comments on my poems ... think there might have been a glitch on the site, because you posted two identical comments on two different poems (not sure how that happened?) ... it's odd again because Seeker (on the same poem) posted a comment that made no sense ... but sounded like it made perfect sense on a completely different poem. Very strange!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/17/2016 1:10:00 AM

Ambitious ... I liked your ideas vermillion. Red is a fitting color to represent ideas as it's very bold. Course ivory raindrops were also pretty cool. Curious what Mr. Silent will think of it ... good luck.