Colourfication

COLOURFICATION As the charcoal clouds coat the azure skies, carnation cheeks duet with a sunny smile greets, her vermilion lips luscious in lure speaks. Her hour-glass shape molded sublime to spring looking olive-coral printed dress. She walking like a panther in ivory high heels. Was that rose or jasmine scent I smell? It tantalized my senses, I breathe, I see anew. Her long straight hair sways as she moves. Soft silver gems adorn her ears and neck while a violet Hermes hang loose to her arm. Her Aphrodite beauty shines, charms more. Sting. Chilled by unknown void and emptiness, suddenly my heart tedious throbbing beats went still, frozen beneath amber eyes stare. My fifty shades of authority slowly melting down I, trying hard to control, coping to hide through. Will my teasing taunts, flawless flaunting pumps, thrall the innocence of the woman in-front of me? _________________________________________________ Poetry Contest: United colours: Colourfication ***3rd Place*** Sponsored by: Silent One 10:38 am, March 17, 2016

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Date: 2/9/2017 6:39:00 AM
So nice to see you on twitter. I've tweeted this once, why not do it again.
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Date: 8/8/2016 4:22:00 PM
Awesome poetry Olive, glad to have read this. it is so inspiring...
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Date: 8/3/2016 8:30:00 AM
Fabulous write. You sweep us along with your words, you tease our senses. Tweet's away.
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Date: 7/29/2016 11:08:00 AM
Ooh, I do love this one; excellent imagery.
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Date: 5/5/2016 6:29:00 PM
Wow, this is rich in very vivid imagery. Beautifully written, and a pleasure to read. *7* from this guy...-G
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Date: 4/9/2016 10:07:00 AM
I really enjoyed the journey your words took me on, thanks Olive.
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Date: 3/28/2016 12:05:00 AM
Olive, Congratulations on your awesome "Colourfication Win." ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/25/2016 4:47:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 3/23/2016 11:47:00 AM
Awesome read, Olive... Miss reading your poems. I will be back in April... LOVE LINDA
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Date: 3/22/2016 6:06:00 PM
Hi Olive, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your colour symphony did play into my mind and it painted such Lovely images. A beautiful gentle poem as always Olive. A seven from me....MIKE.
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Date: 3/22/2016 10:54:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on your win:}
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Date: 3/19/2016 8:26:00 AM
A poem so rich in imagery and beauty. WOW:) all the best for the contest:}
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Date: 3/17/2016 12:47:00 PM
Glad to find a new post of yours, Olive_eloi! This was worth waiting for...beautiful in concept and imagery. The first stanza is very alluring...in the second I sense a pang of guilt. If for a contest, then it's a winner in my eyes:) hugs // paul [will answer u later]
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/21/2016 4:46:00 AM
Paul, I had been busy and you know why, plus I really have a slow connection.. :( I missed writing and I miss reading others but i can't seem to find focus at this time.. =`) thanks much! hugs!~Olive Eloisa
Date: 3/16/2016 10:35:00 PM
Beautiful write. Hugs, Bobby
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2016 9:44:00 PM
Thanks much Anindya .. =`)
Date: 3/16/2016 5:28:00 PM
Love the imagery of this Goddess you have created Olive.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2016 9:46:00 PM
Hi Michael, its been awhile since i posted, thank you for taking time to drop by and leaving your always welcome comment.. =`)
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