Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Free verse

Colourfication

COLOURFICATION

As the charcoal clouds coat the  azure skies,
carnation cheeks duet with a sunny smile
greets, her vermilion lips luscious in lure
speaks. Her hour-glass shape molded sublime
to spring looking olive-coral printed dress. She
walking like a panther in ivory high heels.

Was that rose or jasmine scent I smell?
It tantalized my senses, I breathe, I see anew.
Her long straight hair sways as she moves.
Soft silver gems adorn her ears and neck 
while a violet Hermes hang loose to her arm.
Her Aphrodite beauty shines, charms more.

Sting. Chilled by unknown void and emptiness,
suddenly my heart tedious throbbing beats
went still, frozen beneath amber eyes stare.
My fifty shades of authority slowly melting down
I, trying hard to control, coping to hide through.
Will my teasing taunts, flawless flaunting pumps, 
thrall the innocence of the woman in-front of me?
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Poetry Contest: United colours: Colourfication
***3rd Place***
Sponsored by: Silent One
10:38 am, March 17, 2016

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Scott Thirtyseven February 9, 2017 at 6:39 AM So nice to see you on twitter. I've tweeted this once, why not do it again.

Harry Horsman August 8, 2016 at 4:22 PM Awesome poetry Olive, glad to have read this. it is so inspiring...

Scott Thirtyseven August 3, 2016 at 8:30 AM Fabulous write. You sweep us along with your words, you tease our senses. Tweet's away.

M. L. Kiser July 29, 2016 at 11:08 AM Ooh, I do love this one; excellent imagery.

The Grahamburglar May 5, 2016 at 6:29 PM Wow, this is rich in very vivid imagery. Beautifully written, and a pleasure to read. *7* from this guy...-G

Lenny Gazbowski April 9, 2016 at 10:07 AM I really enjoyed the journey your words took me on, thanks Olive.

Poet Destroyer A March 28, 2016 at 12:05 AM Olive, Congratulations on your awesome "Colourfication Win." ~LINDA~

Street Cries March 25, 2016 at 4:47 PM Nice

Poet Destroyer A March 23, 2016 at 11:47 AM Awesome read, Olive... Miss reading your poems. I will be back in April... LOVE LINDA

Vladislav Raven March 22, 2016 at 6:06 PM Hi Olive, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your colour symphony did play into my mind and it painted such Lovely images. A beautiful gentle poem as always Olive. A seven from me....MIKE.

Joanna Daniel March 22, 2016 at 10:54 AM Back again to congratulate you on your win:}

Joanna Daniel March 19, 2016 at 8:26 AM A poem so rich in imagery and beauty. WOW:) all the best for the contest:}

Paul Callus March 17, 2016 at 12:47 PM Glad to find a new post of yours, Olive_eloi! This was worth waiting for...beautiful in concept and imagery. The first stanza is very alluring...in the second I sense a pang of guilt. If for a contest, then it's a winner in my eyes:) hugs // paul [will answer u later] Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 21, 2016 at 4:46 AM Paul, I had been busy and you know why, plus I really have a slow connection.. :( I missed writing and I miss reading others but i can't seem to find focus at this time.. =`) thanks much! hugs!~Olive Eloisa

Anindya Mohan Tagore March 16, 2016 at 10:35 PM Beautiful write. Hugs, Bobby Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 17, 2016 at 9:44 PM Thanks much Anindya .. =`)

Michael Tor March 16, 2016 at 5:28 PM Love the imagery of this Goddess you have created Olive. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 16, 2016 at 9:46 PM Hi Michael, its been awhile since i posted, thank you for taking time to drop by and leaving your always welcome comment.. =`)