Colorscape

The intricate web
Of life has been spun;
It’s twists and turns hold,
Keys to our very
Existence on Earth.

How we are formed,
Born, survive and 
Die and purpose,
In life’s grand scheme.

Together,
We create;
Colorscape.

Blending
Abstract

Art.


CONTEST NO 505,any form,any theme,upto a max of 20 lines Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/22/2018 5:00:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, ML.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/23/2018 11:12:00 AM

Many thanks, Line.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/18/2018 7:15:00 PM

Nicely done, ML - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/19/2018 12:02:00 PM

Thanks so much Gregory. Appreciate the visit and comments. Blessings to you, as well.

Lucy Harley

Date: 10/3/2018 2:32:00 PM

Love this! Beautifully written

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/4/2018 5:34:00 AM

Thank you, Lucy; glad you dropped by.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/24/2018 5:33:00 AM

Since I was the first to comment and praise it let me be the last to congratulate you dearest, MLK!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/24/2018 6:47:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2018 12:47:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. M.L. - Sorry, I have not been on the "soup" lately - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/24/2018 6:47:00 PM

Yes, and you've been missed but, thank you.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/23/2018 11:04:00 PM

You have created a masterpiece here with your words. Art in motion. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/24/2018 6:48:00 PM

That's quite a compliment; thanks.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/23/2018 4:36:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD , M.L....Eve

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/24/2018 6:48:00 PM

Thank you.

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/23/2018 4:27:00 PM

Hello MLK, Best Congratulations on the POTD honor!! A truly fabulous write in every respect. The theme development in consonance with the Diminished Hexaverse style has made "Colorscape" all the more compelling and captivating for the reader. Outstanding Work!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/24/2018 6:50:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gary; your observations and comments are appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/23/2018 4:07:00 PM

Superb M.L.! Congratulations on having this wonderful piece honored with POTD!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/24/2018 6:49:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/23/2018 10:15:00 AM

Never heard of this form but well written piece ML,, congratulations on POTD. Tom

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Tom; it's one of the forms I enjoy writing.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/23/2018 10:12:00 AM

Congratulation s M.L. on your wonderful POTD. I so agree with the message of your piece. I really enjoyed it,' Well done !!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:19:00 PM

Thank you Mike. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/23/2018 9:51:00 AM

Well done M.L., congratulations for POTD honors...

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:19:00 PM

Thanks Charlie.

Warren Doll

Date: 9/23/2018 8:55:00 AM

Your poem is well written with many layers of thought. Congratulations on you POTD, It is well deserved,

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Warren.

Maria Williams

Date: 9/23/2018 8:00:00 AM

Congratulations on getting POTD on this well constructed poem M.L....Maria

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:18:00 PM

Many thanks Maria.

Charles Messina

Date: 9/23/2018 7:53:00 AM

A wonderful poem M.L. Congrats on a well deserved POTD

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Charles; I'm glad you felt it was "wonderful".

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 9/23/2018 7:40:00 AM

Lovely melodious piece ML, congratulations on potd! xomo

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:17:00 PM

Thank you Maureen; am glad that you stopped by again.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/23/2018 7:16:00 AM

Here I am again to congratulate you M.L. Kiser for your POTD! A well deserved acknowledgement.. keep shining. Be blessed always.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:17:00 PM

Thank you again, Besma; I appreciate the comments.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/23/2018 6:45:00 AM

Back with congrats on poem of the day..well earned, M.L.K.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:16:00 PM

Thanks so much, Vijay.

Silent One

Date: 9/23/2018 5:40:00 AM

In a black and white world, true colours shows.. What a wonderful poem and ending... Congrats on a well deserved POTD...

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:16:00 PM

Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2018 3:36:00 AM

you spun a wonderful poem and I love the form you used ML:-) many congrats on POTD so lovely to see a new and different name on the POTD list:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/23/2018 3:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan. I'm glad you liked it.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/21/2018 12:32:00 PM

A work of mind and art dipped into impressive beauty! A write that shakes the mind, cheers the heart and pleases the eyes! Thank you for sharing M.L. Kiser. Best regards. Stay blessed always.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/21/2018 5:24:00 PM

Thanks again, Besma and many blessings to you, as well.

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/21/2018 11:02:00 AM

Wow! Outstanding imagery! And deeply thought provoking. Truth is, I believe, the Abstracts are closer than the Realists when it comes to life's qualities and deeper purpose. Great poem!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/21/2018 5:24:00 PM

I've had that same thought, Joe. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece and thanks so much.