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Colors of the Sunrise

Shades of every color nap behind my eyes hoodwinked by sleep I forget to remember the chosen colors of my last sunrise; Yes, its a game she likes to play, hide then seek until tomorrow waiting for my open-eyes,
"dawn's debut "
While I, knee deep in slumber follow the reel in black and white, she fans her skirts on Eastern time while I embed at nine; I claim the color black and sleep until dawn, beneath the azure memory, of her brawn . Contest Name: The Color Black Sponsor : Chantelle Cooke August 28, 2021

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Date: 9/18/2021 10:55:00 PM
“beneath the azure memory” nice, love this. Like your work!
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Date: 8/29/2021 9:02:00 AM
Very nice contest submission. I am still puzzling over mine. Well done Vie, Delice
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Date: 8/28/2021 6:47:00 PM
Love the imaginative take on the theme, Vie! Your creative images shine! Enjoyed much! :)
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Date: 8/28/2021 3:25:00 PM
Lovely write. I enjoyed it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/28/2021 12:57:00 PM
Dawn's debut! Beautiful. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 8/28/2021 12:00:00 PM
Wish i could have that black all night long. Hugs.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/28/2021 12:02:00 PM
Sometimes I feel like that too. Enjoying the velvet of night, I cradle my thoughts and smile, anything that puts me to sleep, I think, :)
Date: 8/28/2021 10:58:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I have never seen a sunrise. The way you describe it, sounds beautiful. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/29/2021 10:31:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, no I have not seen a sunrise. i am not a morning person. Hugs
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/28/2021 11:58:00 AM
I believe each sunrise has its own beauty. I am sure you have seen a few lovely ones too. Thank you for your kind visit dear Darlene.
Date: 8/28/2021 10:44:00 AM
claim the color black, how evocative of a deep rich sleep, best wishes for the contest!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/28/2021 11:58:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit Michell, hope she likes it, :)

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