Colors of the Sunrise

Shades of every color nap behind my eyes  
hoodwinked by sleep I forget to remember  
the chosen colors of my last sunrise;  
Yes,  its a game she likes to play,  
hide then seek until tomorrow   
waiting for my open-eyes,   
"dawn's debut "
While I, knee deep in slumber follow the reel in black and white, she fans her skirts on Eastern time while I embed at nine; I claim the color black and sleep until dawn, beneath the azure memory, of her brawn . Contest Name: The Color Black Sponsor : Chantelle Cooke August 28, 2021
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Tellaferro Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 10:55 PM
“beneath the azure memory” nice, love this. Like your work!
Skelly Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 9:02 AM
Very nice contest submission. I am still puzzling over mine. Well done Vie, Delice
Leiser Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 6:47 PM
Love the imaginative take on the theme, Vie! Your creative images shine! Enjoyed much! :)
Mcintosh Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Lovely write. I enjoyed it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Sands Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 12:57 PM
Dawn's debut! Beautiful. I enjoyed this :)
Buhagiar Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Wish i could have that black all night long. Hugs.
Rose  Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Sometimes I feel like that too. Enjoying the velvet of night, I cradle my thoughts and smile, anything that puts me to sleep, I think, :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:58 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I have never seen a sunrise. The way you describe it, sounds beautiful. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, no I have not seen a sunrise. i am not a morning person. Hugs
Rose  Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 11:58 AM
I believe each sunrise has its own beauty. I am sure you have seen a few lovely ones too. Thank you for your kind visit dear Darlene.
Faulkner Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:44 AM
claim the color black, how evocative of a deep rich sleep, best wishes for the contest!
Rose  Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Thank you for your kind visit Michell, hope she likes it, :)
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