Colors of the Season

Somewhere in the city beneath the BLISSFUL sun 
A gardener has planting to do with her green thumb 
WHISPERING by are butterflies with ELOQUENT colors to the eye    
Perched above on a limb the neighborhood bird begins to sigh
It declares with LILTING and TRANQUILITY a SPLENDOR to be heard
Thrusting quickly overhead a bluebird cries with DULCET words
Further down the garden path the FRAGRANT LAVENDER came WAFTING past  
The rhythmic swaying to the grass gave way to summer at last  




 Inspired by Andrea Dietrich’s “Word warrior challenge: beautiful words”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/29/2013 2:49:00 AM
Awesome write ,,,, Andrea is a nice friend ;} I read a lot of her poems,,,, thank you for reading The Great Swan" glad you understood what the metaphor on the woods was about. wrote one called Hammer in Hand" with a lot of metaphors ;}
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Date: 4/29/2010 9:52:00 AM
Hey, my friend, Congrats on "Colors of the season! I've sent you an e-mail...Jimmy
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Date: 4/22/2010 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Laura...I'm a little late but not too late..LOL.. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/19/2010 5:08:00 AM
Congrats Laura sounds like my neighbor
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:24:00 PM
Laura, I am so happy to see this in the winner's circle. it is beautifully written and deserving. Congratulations. Connie
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Date: 4/18/2010 10:06:00 AM
Hope you have that green thumb this spring. You have me smiling with this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your success. Way to go! Karen
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Date: 4/18/2010 9:53:00 AM
I loved this poem of spring planting, Laura!! Makes me want to relish the sunshine and the season! Congratulations! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:03:00 AM
Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Andrea's contest... an amazing write and use of her beautiful words..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/18/2010 7:33:00 AM
clever use of the words, weaving them into a lovely rhyme. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:10:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura, and thanks for participating in my first contest here at the Soup. You did very well with the words and I loved that lsat line. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/12/2010 8:36:00 AM
Great write Laura you met the challenge well. I am doing fine. Taking things one day at a time. I will be moving this week so keep me in your prayers...
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Date: 4/10/2010 1:05:00 PM
Laura, beam me over > for this is a garden i would love to walk in >> just beautiful > good luck in Andrea's contest >> James
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:02:00 PM
Well penned poem I like it
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Date: 4/9/2010 5:45:00 PM
What a lovely entry this is Laura. I think Andrea will really have her hands full judging this contest. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for your comments on my poems. Love, Connie
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Date: 4/9/2010 5:37:00 PM
beautiful lg. case words interlope with a peaceful, calming gem! nice work! Laura! and thanks for your kind words on one of my favorites..."avatar" jimbo
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