Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

Colors of Love Seasons

Written: April 27, 2024, for contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

Quote: "Anything born in spring dies in fall, but love is not seasonal."  by Rumi
Poem Form: Fragmented Rhyme created by Constance La France

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                        In the spring, sensitive blooms awaken,
            Warmth grips as leaves quiver with delight.  
Lovers enripen with colors so unshaken,
Painting hearts in shades of dawn light.  
                        Summer appears with a radiant embrace,
Passion boils beneath the broad sunny face.  
Time moves as waves in a smooth race,
      Souls are bound by the ardent fire of love.
            Autumn sighs in the crisp air above,
                        Flowing from dark to light- tones of dove.
Love ages,  but keeps beauty partaken,
            Yet love endures, steady and bright.  
      Reflecting warmth from an inner space,   
            Over seasons, alteration bears to shove.

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Linda Alice Fowler May 6, 2025 at 8:43 AM Your rhyming is always a pleasure to read Las. Congratulations! :)

Valsa George May 4, 2025 at 9:26 PM Back to your poem with hearty Congratulations on your first place win, dear Lasaad.

Paula Goldsmith May 4, 2025 at 11:28 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Colors of Love Seasons" write. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Krishnanand Guptar May 3, 2025 at 11:15 AM Heartiest congratulations fear poem on your top win in this contest with a wonderful poem on the enduring nature of true love despite the flight of time. Wish you a splendid weekend crafting your superb verses.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2025 at 9:22 AM Hi, Las :) - Congratulations on your fourteen beautiful lines in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Paige Hind April 29, 2025 at 9:43 PM Beautiful, Sotto! Your work is always so beautiful and a pleasure to read, truly. :)

Duke Beaufort April 29, 2025 at 5:15 AM SP, a very interesting last line. We may be affected by seasons, but being true to the love of our lives and remembering to celebrate that is truly what makes our lives special. Thanks for the idea and thoughts today. Smiles!

Deb M April 28, 2025 at 3:33 PM What a beautiful uplifting poem Laasad about seasonal love! Such a feel good vibe...love it! Debx

Michael Tor April 28, 2025 at 11:55 AM Dear Lasaad this was so wonderfully written. I love how you associated the passion and love with each season. Clever theme and one I think Constance will appreciate for her contest. Well done my friend, and best wishes for the contest. This one I really like and I am favoring...

Jay Narain April 28, 2025 at 10:59 AM Nice poem on everlasting love.

Valsa George April 28, 2025 at 6:15 AM After the cold, when spring and summer come, embers of love lying dormant will be emblazoned, giving wings to dreams. Autumn matures love and in the chill of winter, though love may age and fade, it will be kept alive without getting frozen with an inner warmth. Love outlives all vagaries of seasons and time. Love is never seasonal. True love survives all hard tests and every impediment. This is Indeed a lovely poem as always. All the Best dear friend.

Ink Empress April 28, 2025 at 3:41 AM Ah this is so profound and so beautiful dr sotto, i agree with you, true love isnt seasonal and blooms always, as your quote says and also your poem with lines "Love ages, but keeps beauty partaken, Yet love endures, steady and bright. " the seamless and heartfelt flow of this is beautiful for the soul and eyes to read and feel! Pleasure reading your poem! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always

Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2025 at 2:17 AM - A beautiful poem about the joy of the seasons, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely new spring week :) - hugs