Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Tyburn

Colors

Zooming
Gleaming
Cracking
Booming
Zooming gleaming colors in the light
Cracking booming in red, green and white

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June 22, 2014
Form : Tyburn
Eighth Place win

( A poetic form tyburn is a six line poem consisting of 2,2,2,2,9,9 syllables. The first four 
lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the 1st, 
2nd, 3rd, and 4th lines as the 5th to 8th syllables)

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James Fraser July 7, 2014 at 2:12 PM Interesting form of which I've not seen before. Having read yours, I'm so willing to give it a try. Thank you for sharing this form se we can read, James :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair June 27, 2014 at 6:12 AM Nice, congrats on the win!!!

John Lawless June 26, 2014 at 10:07 PM OH, the old Tyburn ploy!!! Nicely played. This is an interesting form that I will have to play with. Yours kinda brings the colors to life.

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2014 at 9:06 PM Congratulations on your win with this colorful tyburn.

Mohan Chutani June 26, 2014 at 9:02 PM A nice new form, tyburn, I learn. Dr. Ram, congrats for the win. Mohan

Shadow Hamilton June 26, 2014 at 6:19 PM very good tyburn Ram congrats on placing with this lovely poem ty for entering hugs