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Colorless Confessional

Colorless Confessional It was as if time had resisted capture hid its most precious commodities averted its eyes lest you see into its soul withheld all but the extremes of color Everything became a negative reflection black on white, white on black variations of both accounting for contrast allowing the moment to be stolen There would be future arguments regarding what color the dress was, why Mom always had on the same housecoat, where was Dad when they took the pictures Time’s reluctant moment would pierce the future prick deeply the longings of our hearts, elicit laughter – and tears – intermingling remind us that we too had been young The old camera, the canisters, the leather case the eye that captured a moment of life offering it to us - as a window into our future. John G. Lawless 3/1/2015

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Date: 4/3/2015 8:00:00 AM
John, congratulations on your wonderful win with this beautiful and skillful poem, 7
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Date: 4/2/2015 8:53:00 AM
John, I love the nostalgic emotions felt in your poem. So many memories hidden in those old colorless photographs. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 4/2/2015 4:22:00 AM
Wonderful John! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 3/30/2015 2:52:00 PM
such wonderful memories - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/1/2015 4:54:00 PM
What a wonderful poem this is! took me back, but more important, should be archived for future generations.
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