Michael J. Falotico Poet Tetractys

Colorless

I
                                                       slid down
                                                      a rainbow
                                                   that's colorless
                           screaming fables till the fountain poured bright..

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Red Fiery January 11, 2012 at 10:31 AM so true Michael....feelings and emotions so jumbled up here....u did that in just few wrds...ur emotions streaming out like furious flood, wild but silent, serene , not violent, aaah wonderful !....if ur a fly then u sing with poetic tune...like a dazzling moon..!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 21, 2011 at 4:33 PM so imaginative and ultra creative Michael luv.. took this ride with u all the way .. amazing visuals..xoxo.. J.G. needed this ride luv..

Dinda Minardi November 20, 2011 at 9:39 AM I love the two last lines... Awesome, Michael :)

Cory Long November 20, 2011 at 9:00 AM i like it, you captured the fun side of a rainbow and the colors it brings, cory

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2011 at 8:47 PM Very interesting one, Michael!! Me likes!

Carolyn Devonshire November 19, 2011 at 1:00 PM I love the imagery and the message is so uplifting, Michael. A delight to read! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet November 19, 2011 at 11:36 AM wonderful Tetractys Michael.Enjoyed.