Laura Mckenzie Poet Rhyme

Colorful Hours

And now, no rest for the weary
For cognitive or not, my message is my theory 
Right from the tip of these keys
Hopeful and willing are the words and deeds
 
Light to dark and warm against cold
Caressing the images and the thoughts that they hold 
And there is so much for me to see 
So much more left inside of me 

My minds journey knows no end 
From the beginning of the paper and the ink that I spend 
Wind swept senses 
To old wooden fences 

I am driven through a course of letters and sentences
Assembled and flavored with no repentances 
Be it site or sound 
I guess I’ll keep on penning till I‘m widely renowned

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October 3, 2008 at 6:00 PM What a creative slant on writing. When you get famous let me know--I'll rejoice in your success. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Karen

Heidie Buys October 3, 2008 at 4:30 PM Always a pleasure to read your poems, so keep it up. Well done. Love Heidie

Joseph Spence Sr October 2, 2008 at 12:49 PM This is certainly inspirational and uplifting. Setting a goal for the future is certainly a benchmark to meet. I like the motivation behind this poem and your aspiration. Great job! ~Joseph

Michael Torres October 2, 2008 at 1:16 AM Very nice Laura. Enjoyed your poem very much. Keep up the excellent work.. God bless .....Michael

Phyllis Babcock October 1, 2008 at 1:10 PM A new quest for Laura. Go for it you have a wonderful gift and the will to make it happen. God Bless Phyl

Sharon Winter October 1, 2008 at 7:58 AM Introspective and well penned! Hope you do keep writing, as we will keep enjoying your wonderful poetry. Love, Shar

Chitra Lakhera October 1, 2008 at 6:10 AM Hi Laura, this was a great right, very deep. Loved those images. No doubt you'll be widely renowned one day. Its easy to reach the top but its tough to be there. I wish you do that part too. Thanks a lot. Love, Chitra

George Anos September 30, 2008 at 8:12 PM I can feel here how passionate you are in pursuing this quest! COnsider me as one who knows you and your talent dear. A poem of yearning and longing beautifully rhymed. :o) Take care! George

Carrie Richards September 30, 2008 at 7:40 PM I love the way Michael put it! Yes...it really only matters that the important people in your life appreciate the beauty of your talent...however, I'm sure there is still a wealth of lovely works that aren't yet written by you. You have a wonderful gift...I won't be surprised, if you go far in the poetry world! : ) ~Carrie

Michael Jordan September 30, 2008 at 6:35 PM Hi Laura - The rhyme and flow just enhanced the already outstanding message this poem so profoundly delivers - You go Laura - Always keep in mind that it's more important to be renowned by the few who matter than all the rest - God Bless you