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poem submitted to "Good Old Days" poetry contest, Suzette Richards, sponsor, 7/19/2026

COLORFUL BALLERINAS

fall leaves whirling free colorful ballerinas yellow, orange, brown spinning and twirling en pointe Mother Nature in toe shoes
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Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 8:36 PM
lovely simile ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:45 PM
thank you, Line :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 6:53 PM
Were you a ballerina? nice
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:45 PM
thanks for asking, but no I was not. However, my aunt was a prima ballerina who eventually taught ballet. I spent many hours watching her and her students...picked up a thing or two, hugs, Sara
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September 24, 2025 at 5:45 PM
A lovely poem and image you paint Sara, of ballerina leaves twirling in their toe shoes … Beryl
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:44 PM
awww, thank you, sweet Beryl
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 4:50 PM
Hello sara, Mother nature spills her paintbox evenly to her leaves. A beautiful scene. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 4:54 AM
Hello Sara, Sara, I enjoyed this poem. Now it will be my fav. Your welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:44 PM
howdy, Darlene...thanks for visiting and for your kind words....hugs from Texas, Sara
Hind Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 4:19 PM
"Mother Nature in toe shoes" wow, Sara
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:44 PM
thank you, dear Paige!
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