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Colorful Or Chimera Words- Sponsored by: Constance La France

Written on 8/30/2023

 

 

Coisas de Terê

Carl Von Bergen - 1853/1933 - German - "Two Girls Playing With A Paper Garland"

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"There is nothing more heartfelt than the enriching sound of children’s laughter." Quote_by poet Colorful world display of spring unfurls Painted bright and vivid, fragrant buds twirls. The sun lay its pale rays upon the fields; Exhale a warm ambient breath it yields. Harvest time and mom and dad out working The fields abundant with food; life giving. I watch my little sister while they're gone, Constant care on her I do focus upon. On the narrow wooden window sit, I sit, My baby sister's big smile pleased with it. With yesterday newspaper I cut out A garland of girls, with glee, she does shout.

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Date: 10/17/2023 6:59:00 PM
Your poem to me was dreamlike. My husband worked on a farm growing up with his father. Occasionally he will talk about their relationship and all the bales of hay they loaded into the silo. Your poem makes me think of the Barbie Doll houses I use to make with my sister when we were little Lots of tape, glue and beds from empty tissue boxes. How nice to find a poem that brings back nice memories.
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Date: 9/10/2023 11:13:00 PM
Eve, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your image, Constance
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Date: 9/6/2023 11:33:00 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Eve (I remember these paper garlands from my childhood... a fond memory) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 9/6/2023 10:30:00 AM
Artfully done! Kudos! Max
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Date: 9/6/2023 7:24:00 AM
You did it again my friend! Beautiful in so many ways.
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Date: 9/5/2023 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. I enjoyed it. I love the picture. So Sweet... Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/31/2023 12:26:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Date: 8/30/2023 7:38:00 PM
A delightful, heart-warming write, Eve! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/30/2023 7:29:00 PM
I love this Eve so beautiful to read of the warmth of the girls playing. Your theme was clever and well thought of. Love the painting also it perfectly lends to the words written. This one is a favorite Dear Lady...
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