Colored Pencils

Outspoken colored pencils Drawing some beautiful eyes On a soft spoken woman Bringing much delight Russell Sivey

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 5/28/2012 5:27:00 PM

nice personification, as if you had nothing to do with it! deightful for sure :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/28/2012 8:00:00 AM

Great one..Has such wonderful flow and rhythm..Enjoyed..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2012 2:37:00 AM

outspoken and soft-spoken!.. russell, beautiful contrast that paints lovely word canvas... always a smashing feeling to read you!.. :) huggs!

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/27/2012 10:17:00 PM

You made the most out of only twenty-six syllables here. Good writing Russell.