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Color Me Beautiful

I live in a dark stretch of land part ocean, part lava 
sheer as light but opaque where the eyes meet 
I am a pool of hard matter, still I appear translucent,  
when you look at me with those big brown eyes.  
Do you fancy me? Color me beautiful and find out; 
I am full of helium, neon, ad hydrogen, perfumed 
by methane, ammonia and carbon dioxide, ...
Do you like my silicon round, my phosphorus shine ? 
I wore a sodium spritz for you, feel my magnesium 
am I female/ male ? Color me  beautiful and find out; 
I boast about my crust and my mantle is hard core 
stepping up to the plate I enhance the telescopes,  
with my sippy blue and splash of silver, I am me.    
Take your time before you X me in the box,   
I am moon cisgender to my nature, do you like ? 
I am moon, all moon, equivocally endangered  
when you select a sex for me, so won't you please, 
color me beautiful, no matter what hues you see.  
 

August 3, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 8/4/2021 1:39:00 PM
A mystical rose coloured pallet of beautiful words befitting the author's stamp
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Date: 8/4/2021 8:17:00 AM
A very beautiful poem, We need our lovely moon!
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Date: 8/4/2021 6:00:00 AM
Colour me beautiful~ I did enjoy this write....Delice
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Date: 8/4/2021 2:40:00 AM
I would prefer the red moon. Lovely idea. Hugs.
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Date: 8/4/2021 1:56:00 AM
You have penned a beauty here, Mystic, the moon is inspiring, no matter the gender:) God created it and poets write about it from ever so long ago...
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Date: 8/3/2021 7:55:00 PM
Lovely write, Mystic, you make moon so beautiful.
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Date: 8/3/2021 7:17:00 PM
Ah, such a beauty, Vie. I would also point out that the moon is rocking the tides of the oceans blue. Beautiful writing, indeed!
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Date: 8/3/2021 3:57:00 PM
Hi Mystic, You've penned a good take on the contest theme. Oh, moon, you look beautiful tonight. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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