Color Me Azure

stain the skies with grey
 then color me azure
 tinge my thoughts with mauve
then put thunder in my words
 and let my muse rain down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 8:43 PM
ohhhhh..."let my muse rain down"...LOVE THAT!!! congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Turner Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 1:43 PM
This is an excellent write Joseph. 5 lines of gold!
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September 6, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Thank you Daniel
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August 27, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Over time I am finding the "Tanka" style of poetry more and more appealing...This is very good indeed, Joseph - Superb in fact!! My very best regards. :) john P.s Top marks!
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August 27, 2016 at 1:19 PM
It is a very nice style...Thank you John
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August 27, 2016 at 12:41 PM
- Excellent written, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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August 27, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Thank you Sunshine ..hugs
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August 27, 2016 at 12:12 PM
A storming write Joseph! :-) hugs Jan xx
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August 27, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Thank you Jan...hugs
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