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Colloidal

oil and water
(feelings + thoughts)


shake it

drip
drop
oil

shake it
create this colloidal 
emotion, I mean, emulsion

drip
drop

allegorynaturefree verse

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/28/2011 3:27:00 PM

oh most precisely lovely haiku! congrad's oh fast learning and cutest one! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/28/2011 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Short Short Haiku" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Joseph Osita

Date: 11/26/2011 3:37:00 PM

Many congrats on your big place win in the contest. Have a nice day

David Williams

Date: 11/26/2011 12:03:00 PM

Nikko congrats on your win, excellent..David

Kash Poet

Date: 11/26/2011 8:06:00 AM

Beautiful imagery here Nikko!Congrats on your win.

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/26/2011 1:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your success with these delightful haiku... well done Nikko...Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2011 11:41:00 PM

Nikko, these were so pretty. and unbelievably I had not even seen them yet. A big congratulations to you. Well deserved win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/25/2011 8:16:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Nikko. Nicely written haiku. Kim

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/25/2011 5:03:00 PM

You are nailing the haiku in the strict form ....hooray for you, Nikko, these are wonderful! Congratulations !!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/25/2011 4:39:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in both of these winning poems Nikko. Congratulations. I can't be on the computer much these days because of eyestrain. Will read what I can. Blessings

Anne Rutherford

Date: 11/24/2011 4:20:00 AM

NikkoI like how we can say so much in so few words with Haiku poetry . The first is my favourite. Anne.

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/18/2011 9:24:00 AM

Nice short poems. The second one is beautiful - worthy of Basho! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/17/2011 8:23:00 AM

Nice Haiku's Nikko makes me think of summer rather than the snow we have on the ground. Supposed to have more snow today with lots of wind. Hate winter season-so rose blooms take me to a nice place. love phyl

Nancy Jones

Date: 11/16/2011 7:24:00 PM

sweet!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/16/2011 7:18:00 PM

Dear Nikko~I know this is for skitty skats contest...lol... I'm sending you an invitation to the POETRY CHAT ROOM...lol... not that you don't know how to use YAHOO messenger... Is this a shorter form of haiku... wondering... and your haiku's are very prettyyyy..lucky bee... sippping off my rose bushes.... enjoyed,..p.d.

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