Colliding Galaxies

I become animal
with her
and animals
know no sin...

Dark and delicious
is she
knot of love
ever tightening...

We lay
watching shadows
on the wall
each others faces
she plays with my hair...

Erotic photons
we become
galaxies colliding
exploding into
a million pieces
crashing into one another..
~ ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Awesome, beautiful exotic erotic piece - what a gem! Pandita
Anish Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:10 PM
Hot work! Thanks for you kind words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Carroll Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:22 PM
Thanks Matt!
Vaso Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 12:34 AM
Great piece here Ken!!!! Loved it!
Carroll Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:22 PM
Thank you Arthur!
Manassian Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 10:45 PM
I found this so so beautiful, Ken......AWESOME in every way
Carroll Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:21 PM
Thanks as always Eileen!
Harrell Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 5:19 PM
Haha, nice way to put it!
Carroll Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:21 PM
Thank you Toguyen!
Carrillo Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 10:24 AM
Very well written Ken. Buen trabajo... Lucilla
Carroll Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Buen dia Lucilla!
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