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Collector Collected

She was once a spirited soul Trekking along all alone, Many she crossed paths with; Some left an impression on her Some good some bad; But no one stayed for long But one friend or two, Yet none of those that came and went That walked away; crawled away Or were kicked away, Left without a searing pain in their body, They felt the suffering of her loss They would never forget this regret, One day she found another Who could not be chained down; Who felt the ties but fought them; Until even he fell but only on one knee, He would walk alongside but not with her, Because under her strong independence Laid within a submissive acquiescence, A heart longing to belong; and there was one Who had the only key to her beating love, And as she surrendered herself to him The collector had finally been collected...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/30/2012 7:47:00 PM
So meaningful and deep! I mean seriously, Is this published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Or enter another one of your poems... they all seem really fantastic and creative! Wish you the best with your poetry no matter what you decide!
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