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Collapsing Fragments

I am broken; decayed lying in a cold tomb- Collapsing fragments of raw words spoken bestowed much gloom and doom. O, I shatter when I dream of angels on high, fearing the break down of what I cannot deny. I cry with my head to my thigh- O, I crumble…falling into tears awoken. Date written: June 10, 2019 For the contest, Writing Challenge, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme Sponsor, Dear Heart

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Date: 7/7/2019 4:58:00 PM
Lu Loo, Outstanding! Congratulations on your win! I could feel this so personally. David
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Date: 6/30/2019 3:23:00 PM
Lu, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem and sorry for my delay in visiting ~
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Date: 6/29/2019 12:59:00 PM
beautifully sad Lu Loo congrats on your win I knew Constance would love this the moment I read it :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/25/2019 1:25:00 PM
Collapsing fragments of raw words spoken....this really hit me. The whole poem is heartfelt. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/25/2019 11:41:00 AM
yOu chose same theme as I did. I love this, Lu Loo. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 6/24/2019 8:03:00 PM
Your potent pen delivers such beautifully expressed sad emotions, Lu loo. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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