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Collage of Juncture

a once vibrant, now discolored rose, a memory of past that faded too fast now teeters atop an old photo my fingers stumble past it knowing if touched its petals would crumble it's a perpetual reminder of how fragile life really is the wedding photo, young lovers exchange promises of heart till death do them part beneath the folds of broken dreams through my eyes it seems they belong protected and framed within glass yet i wonder are they ashamed as they join together in the beyond my childhood through the ages a race of past, pages of life fading to death amidst my walls this collage of juncture can puncture my own heart as i remember each memory of time passing
11/02/2013

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Date: 11/16/2013 8:22:00 PM
Belated congratulations on your well deserved win. Love your collage of words. SuZ
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 8:40:00 PM
thank you :) hugs
Date: 11/16/2013 6:23:00 AM
Aha i find the winners page n i recognise yor name n hapily see u came 1st or 2nd in d contest, wow many many congrats sandra, dis was a fabulous poem out of memories frm a collag frame portrait. I admire d line how u say 'framed within glass' n d rhymin juncture with puncture, brill.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 8:40:00 PM
thank you so much :) hugs
Date: 11/13/2013 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/13/2013 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Richard! :) hugs
Date: 11/12/2013 9:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the win, Sandra
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2013 9:28:00 AM
thank you so much Dr Ram :)
Date: 11/12/2013 7:34:00 PM
Ohh reading your verses makes such lovely mouth music! strong internal rhyme! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/12/2013 7:41:00 PM
thank you Debbie...the original rules were free verse, with some internal rhyme thrown in and i tried hard to adhere to them...hugs :)
Date: 11/12/2013 6:15:00 PM
:-) :-) :-) new it would be here..congratulations!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2013 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Donna...and yes you did say it would be a winner :) hugs
Date: 11/12/2013 4:07:00 PM
way to go, now I see we are on the list together!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2013 7:14:00 PM
thanks...and yes we are :) hugs
Date: 11/12/2013 1:44:00 PM
You really weaved a beautifully and well constructed look of the fragility of life. Stunning work. Congrats on the well deserved win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2013 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Karen...hugs :)
Date: 11/12/2013 11:10:00 AM
Oh my, I don't know how this contest ever got judged..this is outstanding. congrats to you. BG
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2013 7:13:00 PM
i agree Barbabra so many worthy pieces in this contest... thank you for your kind comment :) hugs
Date: 11/11/2013 9:08:00 PM
Great, outstanding work on the fragility of life. --Alex
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2013 7:13:00 PM
thank you Alex :) hugs
Date: 11/11/2013 3:53:00 PM
Life is a very delicate and precious thing, and I wish that more people would realize that. This is very sentimental and very beautiful, Sandra! I love the title of this poem, too, very clever!...Thank you for all of the kind congrats. I appreciate it very much! :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/11/2013 6:50:00 PM
thank you Kelly...in my family many have died fairly young...it makes you realize tomorrow may never come... life is fragile and beautiful.... hugs :)
Date: 11/10/2013 3:51:00 PM
Tis to true Sandra; Yet if you live in the moment where there is no future or past you will be happier and your life will be full. Ofcourse we have memories. loves etc. but only if we keep them in their proper place can we truly create the next adventure and look through the eyes of love again. So many moments to be kind to discover to love. Like seeing everything each day for the first time. Make your moments golden. Michael
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/10/2013 4:13:00 PM
Thank you Michael...your advice is wise...hugs :)
Date: 11/10/2013 3:14:00 PM
the first stanza about fragility is just fantastic.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/10/2013 4:15:00 PM
thank you...it was a rose I kept from the funeral arrangement...I actually had a few.. hugs :)
Date: 11/10/2013 3:14:00 PM
wow, Sandra, this is such a moving piece. How did I ever miss it? So the collage contest never got judged yet, right? It must be for that one. I am anxious to see its winner list and can't even remember now whose contest that was!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/10/2013 4:14:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...it's Craig's contest...it just closed out and should be judged very soon I am guessing :) hugs
Date: 11/10/2013 6:48:00 AM
Excellent. A very heartfelt write. Enjoyed, Tfs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/10/2013 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Ravi :) hugs
Date: 11/5/2013 1:24:00 PM
time is short the word perpetual one I use a lot a sense of loss and longing xxx davidscott
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/5/2013 6:03:00 PM
Thank you David....good to see you again :)
Date: 11/4/2013 3:40:00 PM
love this powerful write, Sandra
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2013 8:16:00 PM
thank you Jack :) hugs
Date: 11/4/2013 12:03:00 PM
Reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..I have noticed your work today.Thanks for stopping by.Your presence was encouraging..Sara
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2013 8:16:00 PM
thank you Sara...hugs :)
Date: 11/4/2013 11:08:00 AM
Here you describe your past through the contest.Great people of the world always has to over take this things and this gives the news of your greatness in the next days;surely...great piece of work.All the best in the contest dear
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2013 11:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Litan...have a great day...hugs :)
Date: 11/3/2013 9:39:00 AM
Crossroads. The most vital point of our lives for all the reasons...love, pain, direction, wants, & needs. Incredibly done.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2013 11:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Drake...it was hard to keep this under 20 lines.... hugs :)
Date: 11/3/2013 8:46:00 AM
Very exact and nice take on the theme of the collage, Sandra
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2013 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Dr Ram...hugs :)
Date: 11/3/2013 6:48:00 AM
I was blown way by this....absolutely beautiful.. sure winner already if for collage held dear contest....
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2013 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Donna....i first wrote a trimerc and the collage idea was expanded on from that poem :) hugs
Date: 11/2/2013 10:42:00 PM
A very heartfelt write and brilliant take of the theme my dear friend Sandra. An excellent poem for the entry, I'm pretty sure. By, the way I'm so sorry to hear about your mom. Thank so much again and God bless you always! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2013 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Leonora, my mother passed, then my brother, then my father...my sister and i are all that remains of our family...i have my parents wedding picture (though they were divorced) together, than pictures of all of us...then our children and my grandson...i make collages all the time to add to memories...hugs :)

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